List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: Yes, I usually make a simple shopping list before I go because it helps me remember the important items I need to buy.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议使用更准确的时态和句子结构，并明确表达观点。

예시: I don't usually make lists for work or study unless the tasks are very important. When I do, it helps me complete important work successfully.

제안: 回答内容不相关且表达混乱，建议理解问题后给出合理原因，并使用清晰的句子表达。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things naturally.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并避免语法错误。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier to add or edit items anytime. Also, some apps help me organize my tasks efficiently.

× Sure, I will make a simple list when before I go shopping because I think it is helpful for me to remember the important things that I should buy and another things.

✓ Sure, I will make a simple list before I go shopping because I think it is helpful for me to remember the important things that I should buy and other things.

句中使用了多余的连词“when before”，应去掉“when”只保留“before”。另外，“another things”应改为“other things”，因为“another”用于单数名词，复数名词应使用“other”。

× Sure, I will make a simple list when before I go shopping because I think it is helpful for me to remember the important things that I should buy and another things.

✓ Sure, I will make a simple list before I go shopping because I think it is helpful for me to remember the important things that I should buy and other things.

“another things”中“another”用于单数名词，复数名词应使用“other”，所以应改为“other things”。

× Whatever, if I remember it, I will buy it.

✓ Anyway, if I remember it, I will buy it.

“Whatever”用法不当，应使用“Anyway”表示转折或补充说明。

× Well, actually I will not make a list for my work or study unless the thing was very important.

✓ Well, actually I will not make a list for my work or study unless the thing is very important.

句子时态不一致，前半句用将来时“will not make”，后半句用过去时“was”，应统一为现在时“is”。

× Well, actually I will not make a list for my work or study unless the thing was very important.

✓ Well, actually I will not make a list for my work or study unless the things are very important.

“the thing”应为复数“the things”，因为后文指多个重要事项，且谓语动词应与复数主语一致用“are”。

× If I make the list it never failed and it give important work.

✓ If I make the list, it never fails and it gives important work.

“never failed”应改为现在时“never fails”，与条件句时态一致；“it give”应改为“it gives”，主谓一致。

× Well, I think maybe maybe because it is a big engineer for them to make a list.

✓ Well, I think maybe because it is a big challenge for them to make a list.

“engineer”用词错误，应为“challenge”表示“挑战”。

× If you want to make a work for lest you must to know how, when you should get up, when you should sleep and how long you can take.

✓ If you want to make a work list, you must know how, when you should get up, when you should sleep and how long you can take.

“must to know”中“to”多余，应去掉；“make a work for lest”表达不清，应改为“make a work list”。

× If you want to make a work for lest you must to know how, when you should get up, when you should sleep and how long you can take.

✓ If you want to make a work list, you must know how, when you should get up, when you should sleep and how long you can take.

“work for lest”应为“work list”，表示“工作清单”，原句中单复数及词语搭配错误。

× I prefer to make list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

“make list”缺少冠词，应为“make a list”。

× Firstly, I can it is easier for me to edit the new items whenever I remember something important.

✓ Firstly, it is easier for me to edit the new items whenever I remember something important.

“I can it is easier”结构错误，应去掉“I can”，直接说“it is easier”。

× Secondly, with the help of another app I can do my.

✓ Secondly, with the help of another app, I can do my work.

句子不完整，“do my”后缺少宾语，应补充“work”或具体内容。