List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ tự nhiên nhưng có nhiều từ ngữ thừa và lặp lại như "umm", "uh", "like" khiến câu trả lời kém mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời logic hơn. Ngoài ra, nên tránh nói quá dài dòng và tập trung vào ý chính.

예시: No, I usually don't make a shopping list. However, I think making a list is helpful because it saves time and prevents forgetting items. For example, when I shop without a list, I often buy unnecessary things.

제안: Bạn trả lời có ý nhưng có nhiều từ ngữ thừa và phát âm chưa rõ, làm giảm tính hiệu quả của câu trả lời. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý phát âm chính xác các từ như "deadlines".

예시: Yes, I have recently started making lists on my work calendar. It helps me stay organized and meet deadlines efficiently. For instance, I can easily track my tasks and complete them on time.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi phát âm và một số từ bị sai ("Liz is" thay vì "lists"). Bạn nên luyện phát âm và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh dùng từ ngữ không chính xác. Đồng thời, hãy thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. Moreover, they trust their memory to remember tasks without writing them down.

제안: Bạn trả lời có ý nhưng có nhiều từ ngữ thừa và lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như "it integrate" thay vì "it integrates". Bạn nên luyện tập nói trôi chảy, tránh lặp từ và chú ý ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it integrates various functions, such as reminders, which makes it more efficient than paper lists.

× making a list for shopping is a good habit and umm, because it can help us to save our time

✓ making a list for shopping is a good habit because it can help us save time

The phrase 'help us to save our time' is awkward; 'help us save time' is more natural and concise in English. Also, 'umm' and 'and' together are redundant here, so 'and umm, because' should be simplified to 'because'.

× it can help us to save our time

✓ it can help us save time

The preposition 'to' after 'help' is unnecessary in this context. The verb 'help' is often followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'to'.

× Uh, no need to like think over what to buy, where to buy

✓ There is no need to think over what to buy or where to buy

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. Adding 'There is' and removing filler words like 'like' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I think at that

✓ So I think so

The phrase 'I think at that' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'I think so' to indicate agreement or conclusion.

× recently I have been trying to make a list for my work on work calendar

✓ Recently, I have been trying to make a list for my work on my work calendar

The phrase 'on work calendar' is missing the possessive pronoun 'my' to specify whose calendar it is.

× I think that it is very efficient and helpful for my umm, for my work checking

✓ I think that it is very efficient and helpful for checking my work

The phrase 'for my work checking' is awkward. The correct preposition use is 'for checking my work'.

× it happens to like keep up, uh, keep up with my dead lies umm

✓ it helps me keep up with my deadlines

The phrase 'happens to like keep up' is incorrect and informal. Also, 'dead lies' is a misspelling of 'deadlines'. The correct phrase is 'helps me keep up with my deadlines'.

× people don't like making Liz is uh

✓ people don't like making lists

'Liz is' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'lists'. The plural form 'lists' is correct here.

× because they think making a list may be a waste of time and they can easily remember things on their mind

✓ because they think making a list may be a waste of time and that they can easily remember things in their mind

The conjunction 'and' should be followed by 'that' to connect two clauses properly. Also, the preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to 'mind'.

× so they don't need to just write them down

✓ so they don't need to write them down

The adverb 'just' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow. Removing it improves clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because umm, it integrate many other functions

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it integrates many other functions

The verb 'integrate' should be in the third person singular form 'integrates' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× which is more efficient than making a list on paper

✓ which is more efficient than making lists on paper

To maintain consistency, 'making a list' should be pluralized to 'making lists' to match the general context of list-making.