List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
No, I usually just remember items in my mind because it's quicker. But I think making a shopping list is a good habit because it helps people save some time in during the shopping.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Actually I hadn't made a list before July, but recently I have found that my cousin uses a list for work and it's efficient, so I use it and I find it helpful for work and management.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
For me in the past who don't like making lists, it gave me more stress and anxiety because I I would afraid that I couldn't complete my task.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it allows me to check it anytime and anywhere. Besides, my phone can remind me of completing my tasks which helps me stay organized and not.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 75.0제안: 你的回答较为自然，但有些语法错误和表达不够简洁。建议避免重复表达，如“save some time in during the shopping”中“in during”重复。可以用更连贯的连接词来丰富答案。
예시: No, I usually remember the items in my mind because it's quicker. However, I believe making a shopping list is a good habit since it helps save time while shopping.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中时态使用不够准确，句子结构较复杂且略显冗长。建议简化句子，使用更准确的时态，并用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: I didn't use to make lists for work before July. However, after seeing my cousin use them efficiently, I started making lists and found them very helpful for managing my tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 65.0제안: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，如“who don't like making lists”用法不当，重复词汇“I I”，时态和主谓一致错误。建议简化句子，注意语法和表达的准确性。
예시: In the past, I didn't like making lists because they made me feel stressed and anxious. I was afraid I wouldn't be able to complete all my tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答较为自然，但最后一句不完整，缺少结尾。建议完整表达观点，避免句子中断，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can check them anytime and anywhere. Moreover, my phone reminds me to complete tasks, which helps me stay organized and efficient.
문법
× it helps people save some time in during the shopping.
✓ it helps people save some time during the shopping.
这里的介词使用错误，'in during'是不正确的搭配，应去掉'in'，只用'during'表示在购物期间节省时间。
× Actually I hadn't made a list before July, but recently I have found that my cousin uses a list for work and it's efficient, so I use it and I find it helpful for work and management.
✓ Actually, I hadn't made a list before July, but recently I have found that my cousin uses a list for work and it's efficient, so I use it and find it helpful for work and management.
句子中时态使用基本正确，但逗号缺失，且'and I find it helpful'中第二个主语'I'可以省略，使句子更流畅。
× For me in the past who don't like making lists, it gave me more stress and anxiety because I I would afraid that I couldn't complete my task.
✓ For me in the past, who didn't like making lists, it gave me more stress and anxiety because I was afraid that I couldn't complete my task.
这里代词和时态使用错误，'who don't like'应改为过去时'didn't like'，'I I would afraid'中多余重复'I'且'would afraid'不正确，应改为'was afraid'。
× Besides, my phone can remind me of completing my tasks which helps me stay organized and not.
✓ Besides, my phone can remind me of completing my tasks, which helps me stay organized and not forget.
句子结尾不完整，缺少动词，'and not'应补充完整为'and not forget'，使句子完整且逻辑清晰。
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