List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子较长且结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连接词组织细节，使表达更流畅。

예시: I don't usually make a list when I shop because I tend to buy things spontaneously. However, sometimes I make a list to avoid forgetting important items.

제안: 回答缺乏清晰的主题句，表达不够连贯，且有语法错误。建议先明确回答是否做清单，然后解释原因，使用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: I used to make lists for my work, but they didn't help much because I often procrastinate. Therefore, making lists doesn't always improve my productivity.

제안: 回答重复且不完整，缺乏具体细节和逻辑连接。建议给出具体原因，避免重复，并用连接词丰富内容。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and believe it doesn't help them stay organized. Personally, I also feel that lists can be ineffective if not used properly.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构有误。建议明确表达偏好，并用连贯的句子解释原因。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient to carry and I can check it anytime. Paper lists are easy to lose, which is frustrating.

× Personally speaking, I thought make a list when I'm shopping because I usually be a person who would like to postpone something important and in the supermarket I would like to buy something what I want to buy at that moment instead of preparing for it in advance.

✓ Personally speaking, I think about making a list when I'm shopping because I am usually a person who would like to postpone something important and in the supermarket I would like to buy something that I want to buy at that moment instead of preparing for it in advance.

句中使用了过去时态“thought”，但表达的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“think”。此外，“usually be”应改为“am usually”，保持主谓一致和时态一致。

× ...and in the supermarket I would like to buy something what I want to buy at that moment instead of preparing for it in advance.

✓ ...and in the supermarket I would like to buy something that I want to buy at that moment instead of preparing for it in advance.

关系代词“what”用法错误，应该用“that”来引导定语从句，指代先行词“something”。

× I used to make this for my work but it doesn't work because I'm a person who usually procrastinates some important things and I often forget the importance, although I made a list so I think it doesn't matter for me.

✓ I used to make lists for my work but they don't work because I'm a person who usually procrastinates on some important things and I often forget their importance, although I make a list so I think it doesn't matter for me.

“make this”中的“this”指代不明确，应改为复数“lists”以符合语境。动词时态应保持一致，且“procrastinates some important things”应改为“procrastinates on some important things”，介词使用错误。

× I used to make this for my work but it doesn't work because I'm a person who usually procrastinates some important things and I often forget the importance, although I made a list so I think it doesn't matter for me.

✓ I used to make lists for my work but they don't work because I'm a person who usually procrastinates on some important things and I often forget their importance, although I make a list so I think it doesn't matter for me.

代词“it”指代不明确，应使用复数“they”指代“lists”。“the importance”应改为“their importance”，指代前文提到的重要事情。

× I think some people don't like making this because making this is very trivial and maybe not useful.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because making them is very trivial and maybe not useful.

“this”指代不明确，应改为复数“lists”及相应代词“them”，保持代词与先行词一致。

× For me, making this is very useless.

✓ For me, making lists is very useless.

“this”指代不明确，且句子结构不完整，应明确指代“lists”。

× I used to make a list for my work, but it doesn't matter because.

✓ I used to make a list for my work, but it doesn't matter to me because of that.

句子不完整，缺少原因或结果，需补充完整表达。

× Maybe I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can take my phone easily.

✓ Maybe I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can carry my phone easily.

“take my phone”用法不当，应使用“carry my phone”表示携带。

× If I make a list on my table, I would take them on and it's very terrible.

✓ If I make a list on my table, I would take it with me and it's very terrible.

“them”指代错误，list是单数，应使用“it”；“take them on”表达不自然，应改为“take it with me”。