List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "stay my portrait". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và có logic hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save time and organize the necessary items. This way, I can shop quickly and avoid forgetting anything important.

제안: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy tránh lỗi từ vựng như "league" và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, nên cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách danh sách giúp bạn.

예시: As a student, I make lists when I have exams. They help me manage my time effectively and ensure I don't forget to study any subjects. Thanks to this method, I have achieved higher scores.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể hơn. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi từ vựng.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time. Moreover, they believe they can complete their tasks without writing them down.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên, mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, nên giải thích cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại để làm danh sách.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient to organize my activities. Also, I can easily check off tasks when I complete them.

× Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save time and arrange necessary item I need and this way I can shop quickly and stay my portrait.

✓ Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save time and arrange necessary items I need, and this way I can shop quickly and stay on my budget.

The word 'item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple things needed. Also, 'stay my portrait' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'stay on my budget' or similar. The correction addresses the plural form and clarifies the phrase for meaning.

× I'm a student and my colleagues when I have exam, this list can help me approach the time effectively.

✓ I'm a student, and when I have exams, this list can help me manage my time effectively.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'my colleagues' which is unrelated here, and 'approach the time' is incorrect. The correction removes 'my colleagues' and replaces 'approach the time' with 'manage my time' for clarity and correctness.

× Moreover, it can support me avoid forgetting other subjects.

✓ Moreover, it can help me avoid forgetting other subjects.

The verb 'support' is incorrectly used with 'me avoid'; the correct verb is 'help' followed by the base verb 'avoid'. This correction fixes the verb usage and preposition issue.

× This league gave me higher point.

✓ This list gave me a higher score.

'League' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'list'. Also, 'point' should be plural or replaced with 'score' to fit the context. The correction fixes the noun choice and number.

× Some people don't like making this because it was time for people.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because it takes time.

'Making this' is vague; it should be 'making lists'. 'It was time for people' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'it takes time'. The correction clarifies the pronoun and verb usage.

× Moreover, they think instead of making a list, they can do their task.

✓ Moreover, they think that instead of making a list, they can do their tasks.

'Do their task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the plural subject 'they'. Also, adding 'that' improves sentence structure. The correction addresses pronoun and quantifier agreement.

× I refer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The verb 'refer' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'prefer'. The correction fixes the verb choice and preposition usage.

× It's convenient to arrange them for activities where I need and if I complete this activity I will check and follow this.

✓ It's convenient to arrange them for activities I need, and if I complete an activity, I will check it off and follow up.

The sentence has unclear pronoun references and missing objects. 'Where I need' is incomplete; 'activities I need' is clearer. 'Check and follow this' is vague; 'check it off and follow up' is more appropriate. The correction clarifies pronoun use and sentence structure.