List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，且句子结构较简单。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并且避免重复表达“make a list”。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me prioritize the items I need to buy and avoid forgetting anything important.

제안: 回答较为简短，缺少具体细节和连接词。建议增加具体例子或说明，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.

제안: 回答中出现了单词错误（leaks应为 lists），影响理解。建议注意用词准确，并且可以用连接词丰富句子结构。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming, and they prefer to keep their plans flexible to adapt to changes.

제안: 句子结构不完整，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，明确表达原因，并避免冗余。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is portable and convenient, allowing me to check my tasks anytime and anywhere.

× When I go to shop I always make a list because it can make me know the priority things I buy.

✓ When I go shopping I always make a list because it helps me know the priority things I buy.

这里的错误是单复数问题，'go to shop' 应改为 'go shopping'，因为 'go shopping' 是固定搭配，表示去购物。'priority things' 也可以理解为 'priority items'，但这里主要纠正动词搭配。

× Some people don't like making leaks because they find the process time consuming and they prefer to keep their plans flexible.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find the process time consuming and they prefer to keep their plans flexible.

这里 'making leaks' 是错误的单词使用，应为 'making lists'，因为题目和上下文都在谈论制作清单。

× I prefer make a list on my phone rather than on paper because the phone is portable so I can check the important things and time and any space.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone rather than on paper because the phone is portable so I can check the important things and time and any space.

动词 'prefer' 后面应接动名词形式，故 'prefer make' 应改为 'prefer making'。