List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answers more fluent and avoid hesitations or incomplete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy, so I don't forget anything important.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer clearer and more logical. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and be more specific about how making a list helps you.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks efficiently. As a result, I save time and know exactly what I need to do each day.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid incomplete or confusing sentences. Use linking words to connect your reasons and give specific explanations.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and may not know how to organize their tasks properly during the day.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' and use complete sentences. Also, explain your reasons clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it is easy to carry around, and I don't need to worry about battery life or spending money on apps.

× I prefer making a list on paper because it's make me easy for uh.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper because it makes it easy for me.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the phrase 'make me easy' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'makes it easy for me'. This correction improves subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× it save a lot of money.

✓ it saves a lot of money.

The verb 'save' should be in the third person singular form 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement error that needs correction for grammatical accuracy.

× It saved my time also and I know what I would do.

✓ It saves my time also and I know what I will do.

The sentence mixes past tense 'saved' with present/future context. Since the student is talking about a habitual action, present tense 'saves' and future tense 'will' are appropriate. This correction aligns the verb tenses with the intended meaning.

× so it avoids. Forgetting what to purchase?

✓ so it helps me avoid forgetting what to purchase.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. 'Avoids' should be followed by a gerund 'avoiding' or the phrase restructured. The corrected sentence combines the ideas properly, improving sentence flow and clarity.

× some people inherently don't like doing a list is make them boring.

✓ some people inherently don't like making lists because they find them boring.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction and structure. 'Is make them boring' is ungrammatical. The correction uses 'because' to connect clauses and corrects verb forms for clarity and grammatical correctness.