List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较自然且内容相关，但表达中有些口语化词汇（如 'cause'）和重复表达，且句子较长，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时使用更正式的表达。

예시: I sometimes make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and remember important items. However, I often shop without a list, preferring to buy items spontaneously, especially when I find good bargains.

제안: 回答内容相关，但存在语法错误和表达不完整（如最后一句未完成），且口语填充词较多，建议注意语法准确性，减少口语填充词，完整表达观点。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and avoid missing important tasks like meeting deadlines or communicating with clients. For example, I use a digital app on my phone to track my daily responsibilities effectively.

제안: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但部分表达略显口语化，且有语法错误（如 'plans often changes' 应为 'plans often change'），建议注意语法一致性，使用更正式的表达。

예시: I think it depends on their personalities. Some people prefer to be flexible and go with the flow, so they dislike making lists. Additionally, they may feel that plans change frequently, making lists seem like a waste of time.

제안: 回答不完整且有较多口语填充词，表达不够连贯，建议减少重复和填充词，完整表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: To be honest, I use both methods. For groceries and daily items, I prefer making a list on my phone using a digital app. However, for important things like enrollment deadlines, I usually write the list on paper to ensure I don't miss anything.

× I just buy things that are bargained.

✓ I just buy things that are bargained for.

动词'bargain'后面需要介词'for'来构成被动表达，表示'被讨价还价的东西'。缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× which make.

✓ which makes.

主语是单数'digital app'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'，而不是原形'make'。

× plans often changes quickly

✓ plans often change quickly

主语'plans'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'change'，而不是单数'changes'。

× When I buy grocery or some umm daily stuff, I would choose to.

✓ When I buy groceries or some daily stuff, I would choose to.

名词'grocery'应使用复数形式'groceries'表示日常购买的食品杂货；句子末尾缺少宾语，需补充完整。

× To to be honest, I use both methods.

✓ To be honest, I use both methods.

句首重复了'to'，应删除多余的一个，保持句子结构正确。