List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and filler words. Use clear linking words to connect your ideas and correct grammar, such as 'forget' instead of 'forgot'. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain why making a list helps you stay within your budget.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from forgetting items. Moreover, it allows me to stick to my budget and avoid unnecessary purchases.

제안: Improve sentence structure and clarity by using linking words and avoiding redundancy. For example, clearly state the purpose of your list and how it helps you track completed tasks. Use simpler, more natural phrasing.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work to keep track of my tasks. When I complete a task, I note it in my diary, which helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve coherence by using linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Also, clarify your ideas with more precise vocabulary and grammar. For example, explain that some people prefer flexibility and rely on memory rather than lists.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to shop freely and rely on their memory. As a result, they might not consider their budget and often buy new items that catch their attention in the store.

제안: Complete your sentences and avoid repetition. Use clear and natural expressions to explain your preference. For example, mention convenience and accessibility as reasons for using your phone for lists.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's easy to check my list anytime. If I wrote it on paper, I might forget or lose it.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop which is easier way to buy things without forgot Without forget.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop which is an easier way to buy things without forgetting.

The phrase 'without forgot' is incorrect because 'forgot' is the past tense of 'forget'. After 'without', the verb should be in the gerund form '-ing' to indicate the action, so 'forgetting' is correct.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop which is easier way to buy things without forgot Without forget.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop which is an easier way to buy things without forgetting.

The phrase 'easier way' requires the definite article 'an' before it because 'way' is a singular countable noun and needs an article.

× If I make a list it is very easier way to buy.

✓ If I make a list, it is a much easier way to buy.

The phrase 'very easier way' is incorrect because 'easier' is a comparative adjective and should be preceded by 'a' and not 'very'. Instead, 'much easier' or 'a much easier way' is appropriate.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work so that I can remember whether the task is completed or not.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work so that I can remember whether the tasks are completed or not.

The phrase 'whether the task is completed or not' is better expressed in plural 'tasks are completed' to match the context of multiple tasks, and subject-verb agreement must be maintained.

× When I complete my task, I use it to note it on my diary so that I can remember everything.

✓ When I complete my tasks, I note them in my diary so that I can remember everything.

The pronouns 'it' are unclear and redundant. 'Tasks' is plural, so 'them' should be used. Also, 'note it on my diary' is better expressed as 'note them in my diary'.

× So it is very helpful to me to make a list of work task is which I had complete.

✓ So it is very helpful for me to make a list of work tasks that I have completed.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and tense. 'Work task is which I had complete' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'work tasks that I have completed'.

× Some people don't like making lists because they want to shop freely. They they think they can remember everything they needed.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they want to shop freely. They think they can remember everything they need.

The phrase 'they needed' is past tense and inconsistent with the present context. It should be 'they need' to match the present tense.

× They don't think about budget.

✓ They don't think about the budget.

The noun 'budget' here is specific and should be preceded by the definite article 'the'.

× They can buy whatever the new arrival comes in the store.

✓ They can buy whatever new arrivals come into the store.

The phrase 'the new arrival comes in the store' is incorrect. 'New arrivals' should be plural and 'come into the store' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I prefer to make a list on my on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The phrase 'on my on my phone' contains a repeated preposition and should be corrected to 'on my phone'.

× Because I always into my phone so that I can remember everything which I wrote in the phone.

✓ Because I am always on my phone so that I can remember everything which I wrote on the phone.

The phrase 'I always into my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'wrote in the phone' should be 'wrote on the phone'.