List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Azule make a list”应为“I usually make a list”。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。

예시: I usually make a list and write down all the things I need to buy when I go shopping. I often shop on weekends, so having a list helps me remember everything I need.

제안: 回答中表达不清晰，存在语法错误，如“walk under the list”应为“work through the list”。建议使用更准确的表达，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I often make a list before finishing work because it helps me stay organized. By working through the list, I can complete my tasks more efficiently.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议明确表达观点，使用完整句子，并提供具体原因。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes their time. Others believe they can remember tasks without writing them down.

제안: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误，如“forgot”应为“forget”。建议注意时态一致，并简化表达使其更流畅。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's very convenient and I always carry it with me. Sometimes I forget to bring a paper list, so using my phone is easier.

× Azule make a list and write all the things which I need to buy when I go to the shop.

✓ Azule makes a list and writes all the things which I need to buy when I go to the shop.

主语是第三人称单数（Azule），谓语动词应加-s，表示单数第三人称的现在时态。

× Azule make a list and write all the things which I need to buy when I go to the shop.

✓ Azule makes a list and writes all the things which I need to buy when I go to the shop.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，保持主谓一致。

× You know, I often go to the shop at the weekend.

✓ You know, I often go to the shops at the weekend.

shop在此处表示复数，指多个商店，通常用复数形式。

× If I walk under the list which I've written, it helps me a lot.

✓ If I walk through the list which I've written, it helps me a lot.

短语应为“walk through the list”，表示逐项查看，使用“walk under”不合适。

× If I walk under the list which I've written, it helps me a lot.

✓ If I go through the list which I've written, it helps me a lot.

应使用“go through”表示仔细查看，使用“walk under”是不正确的介词搭配。

× You know, for one reason people think making a list with with their time.

✓ You know, for one reason people think making a list wastes their time.

“think making a list with with their time”表达不正确，应使用“wastes their time”表示浪费时间。

× And someone think they can do it by order?

✓ And some people think they can do it by memory.

“someone”应改为“some people”表示一些人；“by order”表达不清，应改为“by memory”表示凭记忆完成。

× Sometimes I forgot to take a picture with me, so it is quite difficult for me to use paper if I haven't prepared well.

✓ Sometimes I forget to take a picture with me, so it is quite difficult for me to use paper if I haven't prepared well.

句子描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“forget”，而非过去时“forgot”。