List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. For example, say "It helps me remember what to buy and saves me time by preventing multiple trips."

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and saves me time by preventing multiple trips to the store.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and informal expressions. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid fillers like "like." For example, say "I sometimes make a list for work, but I often don't follow it, so it doesn't work well for me."

예시: I sometimes make a list for my work, but I often don't follow it, so it doesn't work well for me.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has tense inconsistency and redundancy. Use consistent tenses and avoid repeating the same idea. For example, say "Some people may not feel the need to make lists, but for me, they help keep me organized and remember my tasks."

예시: Some people may not feel the need to make lists, but for me, they help keep me organized and remember my tasks.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains awkward phrasing and redundancy. Try to express your ideas more clearly and concisely. For example, say "I prefer making lists on paper because it's more permanent, and I tend to forget lists on my phone."

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it's more permanent, and I tend to forget lists on my phone.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I'm going to shop because it keeps me, it help.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I'm going shopping because it helps me.

The phrase 'going to shop' should be 'going shopping' because after 'go' we use the verb in -ing form to indicate the activity. Also, 'it help' should be 'it helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× It helps me remember what items I have to buy and I don't forgetting and just wasting my time to go to the shop again and again because I forget to buy.

✓ It helps me remember what items I have to buy and I don't forget, so I don't waste my time going to the shop again and again because I forget to buy something.

'I don't forgetting' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't forget' because 'forget' is the base form after 'don't'. Also, 'just wasting my time to go' should be 'waste my time going' to use the correct verb form and preposition.

× I sometimes make a list for my work but it usually don't work because I'm I'm like not keeping with the list, I'm not doing what I write there and it basically just don't work out for me.

✓ I sometimes make a list for my work but it usually doesn't work because I'm not keeping to the list, I'm not doing what I wrote there and it basically just doesn't work out for me.

'It usually don't work' should be 'it usually doesn't work' because 'it' is singular and requires 'doesn't'. Similarly, 'it basically just don't work' should be 'it basically just doesn't work'. Also, 'what I write' should be 'what I wrote' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Maybe some people don't feel they need to make a list, but for me honestly making a list, it helped me to keep me organized and helps me remember what I have to do and I'm not forgetting what I was wanting.

✓ Maybe some people don't feel they need to make a list, but for me honestly making a list helps me to keep organized and helps me remember what I have to do so I don't forget what I want.

'It helped me' should be 'helps me' to keep present tense consistent. 'I'm not forgetting what I was wanting' is awkward; better is 'I don't forget what I want' to express habitual action.

× I prefer making a list on paper because I feel like it's more permanent because when I'm doing on my phone I'm usually forgetting that I even do it, so I feel like doing it on paper it's like it's worth.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper because I feel like it's more permanent. When I do it on my phone, I usually forget that I even did it, so I feel like doing it on paper is worthwhile.

'When I'm doing on my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'when I do it on my phone'. 'I'm usually forgetting' should be 'I usually forget' because 'forget' is a stative verb not commonly used in continuous form. 'It's like it's worth' is unclear; 'is worthwhile' is more appropriate.