List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные предложения, избегать повторов и излишних слов, а также четко выражать мысли.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary items.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Следует строить предложения логично, использовать связующие слова и четко объяснять, как список помогает в работе.

예시: Yes, I make a daily to-do list when preparing for exams. It helps me organize my study time effectively.

제안: Ответ не соответствует вопросу и содержит ошибки. Нужно отвечать прямо на вопрос, объясняя причины, почему некоторые люди не любят составлять списки, используя связные и понятные предложения.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally.

제안: Ответ содержит повторы и грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется использовать правильную структуру предложений и избегать излишних слов, чтобы ответ был более естественным и понятным.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's easier to check my tasks anytime.

× I say yes because when I'm with least I don't waste my time to unnecessary things and I I have a plan on my brain that I buy this and this and now waste my money to.

✓ I say yes because when I'm with a list I don't waste my time on unnecessary things and I have a plan in my mind about what I will buy so I don't waste my money.

The phrase 'with least' should be 'with a list' to make sense. The verb 'waste' should be followed by 'on' not 'to'. 'Plan on my brain' is incorrect; it should be 'plan in my mind'. Also, 'now waste my money to' is incorrect; it should be 'so I don't waste my money'. The use of '-ing' form is needed after prepositions like 'on' in 'waste my time on'.

× Yes, when I have prepared for my exams that I have passed, I always every day do a lease where when I read books, when I study for this subject and it also helps because when you get up your time work for you.

✓ Yes, when I have prepared for my exams that I have passed, I always every day make a list of when I read books, when I study for this subject and it also helps because when you manage your time, it works for you.

The phrase 'do a lease' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs clarity. The phrase 'when you get up your time work for you' is incorrect; it should be 'when you manage your time, it works for you'. The use of '-ing' form is needed after prepositions like 'of' in 'make a list of'.

× I think makes people makes a list because they want to save the time to do and don't forget important things because when we get up we very often don't remember what we do.

✓ I think people make a list because they want to save time and not forget important things because when we get up we very often don't remember what we have to do.

The phrase 'makes people makes a list' is incorrect; it should be 'people make a list'. The phrase 'save the time to do' is incorrect; it should be 'save time and not forget'. The verb form after 'don't' should be base form 'forget'. The sentence needs correction in verb forms and structure. The use of '-ing' form is not applicable here but verb forms need correction.

× To be honest, I prefer make a list for my phone because I always my phone always with me and I'm I'm easy to watch my phone and watch because paper don't come for me.

✓ To be honest, I prefer making a list on my phone because I always have my phone with me and it's easy for me to check my phone, and paper doesn't suit me.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in '-ing' form: 'prefer making'. The phrase 'I always my phone always with me' is incorrect; it should be 'I always have my phone with me'. 'I'm easy to watch my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'it's easy for me to check my phone'. 'Paper don't come for me' is incorrect; it should be 'paper doesn't suit me'. The use of '-ing' form after 'prefer' is a grammar rule.