List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够清晰，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，同时增加逻辑连贯性。可以用更自然的表达方式说明你购物时不常列清单的原因。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I often buy things that catch my eye. For essential items, I prefer to order them online and have them delivered to my home.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议用更准确的句子表达你制作工作清单的习惯及其效果，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work every morning. However, I often fail to follow it because unexpected things happen, so the list doesn't always work as planned.

제안: 回答内容不清晰且有语法错误，建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，说明为什么有些人不喜欢列清单，并提供具体原因。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time. They believe they can manage their tasks without writing them down.

제안: 回答中有词汇错误和表达不清，建议明确表达你更喜欢用纸写清单的原因，并用连贯的句子说明优点。

예시: Yes, I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because writing on paper protects my eyes and I can stick the list on my wall to see it anytime. On my phone, I have to unlock it to check the list.

× Not really. I usually I don't.

✓ Not really. I usually don't.

句子中“I usually I don't”结构重复，导致句子不通顺。应去掉多余的“I”，使句子结构完整。

× Least when I go shopping I always find something attractive to me and buy it.

✓ At least when I go shopping, I always find something attractive to me and buy it.

“Least”用法错误，正确表达应为“At least”，表示“至少”。

× That things I will buy, I will buy it online and deliver it to my home.

✓ Those things I will buy, I will buy online and have them delivered to my home.

“That things”中“that”应改为复数指示代词“those”，且“deliver it”应改为被动语态“have them delivered”，以符合语法和表达习惯。

× So I only buy.

✓ So I only buy online.

句子不完整，缺少必要信息，补充“online”使句子完整且符合上下文。

× I found some a lot of accidents happen in my life and I can't obey this secretly so I so it doesn't work.

✓ I found a lot of accidents happen in my life and I can't obey this strictly, so it doesn't work.

“some a lot of”用法错误，应使用“a lot of”表示大量；“secretly”用词不当，应为“strictly”表示严格遵守。

× I think to some people making these meetings waste, a lot of times they think they can do things or do works without the lease and can manage their life.

✓ I think some people consider making these meetings a waste of time; a lot of times they think they can do things or work without the list and can manage their life.

“to some people”应为“some people”；“making these meetings waste”表达不当，应为“consider making these meetings a waste of time”；“do works”应为“work”；“without the lease”应为“without the list”。

× Make the deal with me may reflect the time they wasting.

✓ Making the deal with me may reflect the time they are wasting.

“Make the deal with me”应为动名词短语“Making the deal with me”；“they wasting”缺少助动词，应为“they are wasting”。

× I prefer making orange and paper than on my phone because to me riding on a paper can not only protect my eyes but also can stick on my walls, which I can see it in every time of my life.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because, to me, writing on paper can not only protect my eyes but also can be stuck on my walls, which I can see all the time in my life.

“making orange and paper”应为“making lists on paper”；“riding”应为“writing”；“stick on my walls”应为“be stuck on my walls”；“in every time of my life”应为“all the time in my life”。

× However, when I write it on my I can only open it.

✓ However, when I write it on my phone, I can only open it there.

句子缺少“phone”一词，导致不完整；补充“phone”并调整句子使其通顺。