List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا، وتجنب التردد والكلمات غير الضرورية. استخدم جملة موضوعية واضحة ثم أضف تفاصيل داعمة مختصرة.

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a list when I shop because I tend to forget what I need to buy.

제안: يجب أن تقدم إجابة أكثر تفصيلاً بدلاً من كلمة واحدة فقط. اشرح لماذا لا تستخدم القوائم في عملك وتأثير ذلك.

예시: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I prefer to keep tasks in my mind, but sometimes this causes me to forget important things.

제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا ومنطقية. استخدم جمل مترابطة مع أمثلة أو أسباب محددة لتوضيح وجهة نظرك.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to remember what to write, or they think it's unnecessary since they usually remember tasks without help.

제안: قدم إجابة واضحة ومنظمة مع شرح تفضيلك واستخدام كلمات ربط لتوضيح أفكارك.

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because I like the feeling of writing by hand, but sometimes I use my phone for convenience.

× Yes, sometime, because umm, forget what I want.

✓ Yes, sometimes, because umm, I forget what I want.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural adverb). Also, the subject 'I' is missing before 'forget', which is necessary for a complete sentence.

× Because they forget what they want want or what they think about the work, uh, or the people, what they usually making something that they have.

✓ Because they forget what they want or what they think about the work, uh, or the people, and they usually make something that they have.

The repeated word 'want' is an error. The phrase 'what they usually making' should be corrected to 'they usually make' to use the correct present tense verb form. The sentence structure is also improved by adding 'and' to connect ideas properly.

× Because they forget what they want want or what they think about the work, uh, or the people, what they usually making something that they have.

✓ Because they forget what they want or what they think about the work, uh, or the people, and they usually make something that they have.

The phrase 'the people' is correct, but the sentence is confusing. The correction clarifies the plural subject and verb agreement by using 'they usually make' instead of 'making'.

× Hmm, sometimes my phone. Because actually I just like the paper.

✓ Hmm, sometimes my phone, but actually I just like paper.

The phrase 'the paper' is incorrect here because it refers to paper in general, so the article 'the' should be removed. Also, connecting the two sentences with 'but' improves sentence flow.