List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making sentences more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember all the necessary items. This way, I can shop efficiently and avoid forgetting anything important.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be more fluent and structured. Avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically, such as 'and' or 'so'. Also, complete your sentences clearly and avoid abrupt endings.

예시: Yes, I always make a list of my tasks at work and write them in my notebook. I set deadlines for each task and delegate some responsibilities to others, so I can manage my work effectively.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to connect your points. Avoid awkward phrases and be specific about the problems caused by not making lists.

예시: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and think it wastes time. However, this can cause problems like forgetting important tasks or being less organized.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because I am used to writing notes by hand. It feels more natural to me and helps me remember things better.

× Yes, I always go in the shop and make a list what I want to buy.

✓ Yes, I always go to the shop and make a list of what I want to buy.

The phrase 'go in the shop' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' when referring to going to a place. Also, 'make a list what I want to buy' is missing the preposition 'of' before 'what'. The correct phrase is 'make a list of what I want to buy.'

× To not forget, I write down on my list all the necessary items, products, what I want to buy.

✓ So as not to forget, I write down on my list all the necessary items and products that I want to buy.

The phrase 'To not forget' is awkward; the correct expression is 'So as not to forget.' Also, 'items, products, what I want to buy' is unclear; it should be 'items and products that I want to buy.'

× Although it's very comfortable for me and I manage everything very.

✓ Although it's very convenient for me and I manage everything well.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'I manage everything very,' which is incomplete. The adverb 'very' needs to be followed by an adjective or adverb. The correct phrase is 'I manage everything well.' Also, 'comfortable' is better replaced with 'convenient' in this context.

× I always make a list of my work, what I have to do, what are my tasks and how I uh delegate it.

✓ I always make a list of my work, what I have to do, what my tasks are, and how I delegate them.

The phrase 'what are my tasks' should be 'what my tasks are' to fit the sentence structure. Also, 'delegate it' is incorrect because 'tasks' is plural; it should be 'delegate them.'

× I always set deadlines for each task and follow.

✓ I always set deadlines for each task and follow them.

The verb 'follow' requires an object here. The sentence is incomplete without specifying what is being followed. Adding 'them' clarifies that the deadlines are being followed.

× In my opinion, some people don't like making a list because they now think it's boring and it takes their time in additionally so they don't waste time on writing.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making a list because they think it's boring and it takes their time, so they don't want to waste time writing.

The phrase 'they now think' is incorrect; 'now' is unnecessary. 'It takes their time in additionally' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'it takes their time.' Also, 'don't waste time on writing' should be 'don't want to waste time writing.'

× But in the other hand I think they it caused many other problems.

✓ But on the other hand, I think it causes many other problems.

The phrase 'in the other hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on the other hand.' Also, 'they it caused' is incorrect; it should be 'it causes.' The sentence needs proper subject-verb agreement and conjunction usage.

× So so it might be strange but I used to make it on list rather than on mobile phone.

✓ So, it might be strange, but I used to make lists on paper rather than on my mobile phone.

The phrase 'make it on list' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists.' Also, 'on mobile phone' should be 'on my mobile phone.' The sentence needs commas for clarity.

× Really don't know exact reason, maybe just a habit because of my habit and that I always made make notes on paper.

✓ I really don't know the exact reason; maybe it's just a habit because I have always made notes on paper.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' at the beginning. 'Because of my habit and that I always made make notes' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'because I have always made notes.' Also, 'made make' is a typo and should be corrected to 'made.'