List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat natural but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say "I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy whatever I like at the moment. This way, shopping feels more relaxed and flexible for me."

예시: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy whatever I like at the moment. This way, shopping feels more relaxed and flexible for me.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct verb forms and linking words. For example, "No, I don't usually make lists for my work. Instead, I memorize important tasks and prioritize them."

예시: No, I don't usually make lists for my work. Instead, I memorize important tasks and prioritize them.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to organize your thoughts. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things instantly. However, making lists helps them prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important things."

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things instantly. However, making lists helps them prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important things.

제안: Your answer is good but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrases. Try to use correct expressions and linking words. For example, "I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because writing by hand helps me remember things better. Also, it's easier to organize my thoughts on paper without distractions from notifications."

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because writing by hand helps me remember things better. Also, it's easier to organize my thoughts on paper without distractions from notifications.

× Well I usually don't make at least when I go shopping because I prefer to buy whatever I like at the moment.

✓ Well, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy whatever I like at the moment.

The original sentence is missing the word 'a list' after 'make', which causes confusion. Adding 'a list' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× I just pick the item I need or find interesting and then pay for them at the shop.

✓ I just pick the items I need or find interesting and then pay for them at the shop.

The sentence uses singular 'item' but refers to 'them' later, which is plural. Changing 'item' to 'items' ensures agreement between the noun and pronoun.

× Yeah, easily. I don't make any list, but especially whenever I cooking or shopping or doing something extraordinary, I never to do any list.

✓ Yeah, easily. I don't make any list, but especially whenever I am cooking or shopping or doing something extraordinary, I never make any list.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' before 'cooking' and uses incorrect infinitive form 'to do any list'. Correcting to 'I am cooking' and 'I never make any list' fixes the verb forms and quantifier usage.

× In my opinion maybe they are they are not remember anything in instant and also they forget that's why they make lists or they prioritize tax in not remember in his mind.

✓ In my opinion, maybe they do not remember anything instantly and also they forget; that's why they make lists or prioritize tasks instead of remembering them in their mind.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and verb forms such as 'they are not remember' and 'prioritize tax in not remember in his mind'. Correcting to 'they do not remember', 'instantly', and 'prioritize tasks instead of remembering them in their mind' improves clarity and grammar.

× So this is good for them to making list.

✓ So this is good for them to make lists.

The phrase 'to making list' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to make lists' using the infinitive verb form after 'to'. Also, 'list' should be plural to match general meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because writing my handhelds my remember things better.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because writing by hand helps me remember things better.

The phrase 'writing my handhelds my remember' is incorrect. It should be 'writing by hand helps me remember' to correctly express the idea and use proper pronouns and verbs.

× Also, I find it easier to organize my thoughts on paper without destruction from notifications.

✓ Also, I find it easier to organize my thoughts on paper without distractions from notifications.

The word 'destruction' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'distractions'. This corrects the meaning and usage of the preposition phrase.