List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意句子结构的完整性和时态的正确使用，同时避免重复和不连贯的表达。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and saves time. For example, I use my phone to write down the items I need so I don't forget anything.

제안: 回答不完整且有语法错误，建议完整表达观点，使用正确的语法，并且提供具体例子来支持观点。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list on my laptop every day. It helps me stay productive and prioritize my tasks effectively. For example, I list my meetings and deadlines to manage my time better.

제안: 回答中有语法错误且表达不完整，建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子，同时避免重复和不连贯。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer a more flexible lifestyle and don't want to be restricted by plans. Also, some might find it time-consuming or unnecessary.

제안: 回答较好，但可以通过增加连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富细节使内容更具体。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can add items anytime and anywhere. Moreover, it's convenient to check and update the list without carrying extra paper.

× We are going to shopping.

✓ We are going shopping.

动词go后面接动名词形式表示正在进行的动作，不能加介词to。这里应使用go shopping而不是go to shopping。

× then I can no.

✓ then I can do it.

情态动词can后面应接动词原形，且句子不完整，缺少动词。这里应补充动词do it，使句子完整。

× Every day I'll make A to do list on my laptop.

✓ Every day I'll make a to-do list on my laptop.

不定冠词a后面应接小写字母，且to-do list是固定搭配，需用连字符连接。

× This can help me more productive and priority all the things I need to do.

✓ This can help me be more productive and prioritize all the things I need to do.

help后接动词不定式，productive是形容词，需用be more productive；priority是名词，需用动词prioritize表示“优先处理”。

× some people a little lazy so they don't like making a list for their daily life

✓ some people are a little lazy so they don't like making a list for their daily life

主语some people是复数，谓语动词应使用are而非省略。

× and another reason maybe they like flexible life so that they wouldn't like to make a list for their life.

✓ and another reason is that maybe they like a flexible life so they wouldn't like to make a list for their life.

连接词and后应接完整句子，缺少谓语动词is；so that用法不当，改为so更合适。

× I prefer making a list with my cell phone because I always have it with me

✓ I prefer making a list on my cell phone because I always have it with me

表示在电子设备上做某事，常用介词on而非with。