List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I do shop' and 'I can buy all the things that I wanted.' Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I have a short-term memory. Therefore, I carry it with me to ensure I don't forget anything I need.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve sentence structure. Also, explain your opinion more clearly with linking words.

예시: I usually don't make lists for my work because I find them time-consuming and ineffective. Instead, I prefer to keep tasks in my mind or use other methods.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Avoid filler words and finish your thoughts. Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and ineffective. Others may avoid lists because they don't have enough time or prefer to rely on memory.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Use correct verb forms and complete your ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your points clearly.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because paper can be lost or stolen. Using my phone ensures that my list is always saved and easily accessible.

× I have short term memory.

✓ I have short-term memory.

The phrase 'short term memory' should be hyphenated as 'short-term memory' because it is a compound adjective describing 'memory'. This is a common convention in English to clarify meaning.

× So whenever I go to any shopping mall I carry a list with me so that I can buy all the things that I wanted.

✓ So whenever I go to any shopping mall I carry a list with me so that I can buy all the things that I want.

The phrase 'that I wanted' incorrectly uses past tense when referring to current or habitual desires. The present tense 'that I want' is appropriate here because the speaker is talking about things they want to buy now.

× I usually don't make a list for my work because I don't think it will work because umm making list.

✓ I usually don't make a list for my work because I don't think it will work because umm making a list.

The phrase 'making list' is missing the indefinite article 'a'. In English, singular countable nouns generally require an article, so 'making a list' is correct.

× I think it's a time consuming and wasting of time so I don't make a list.

✓ I think it's time-consuming and a waste of time so I don't make a list.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. Also, 'wasting of time' is awkward; 'a waste of time' is the correct noun phrase.

× As I don't make lists because I think it's very time consuming and not effective for me, umm, but it is very helpful for someone, some other people, umm, people don't make lists because uh, they don't have time or.

✓ I don't make lists because I think they're very time-consuming and not effective for me, but they are very helpful for some other people. Some people don't make lists because they don't have time or...

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and incomplete thoughts. 'It' should be 'they' to refer to 'lists' (plural). Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs to be completed or properly connected.

× I prefer make a list on phone rather than paper because sometimes paper can be stolen or I can lost the paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because sometimes paper can be stolen or I can lose the paper.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb ('to make'). Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. The phrase 'I can lost' is incorrect; it should be 'I can lose' (present tense). Additionally, 'on paper' needs the preposition 'on'.

× But when I make list on the phone it always keep the memory on the phone so that's why I don't pre.

✓ But when I make a list on the phone, it always keeps the memory on the phone, so that's why I don't prefer paper.

The verb 'keep' should be in third person singular present tense 'keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'make list' needs the article 'a'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'I don't pre', which is likely incomplete; 'prefer paper' completes the thought.