List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating words like "when" and try to use linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to provide a bit more specific detail about how the list helps you.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and keeps me focused. For example, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items and saves time during shopping.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are some hesitations and repeated words. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, you could add a specific example of how the list helps your work.

예시: Yes, as a chef, I use a prep list daily to ensure all tasks are completed efficiently. For instance, it helps the kitchen staff coordinate and prepare ingredients on time, which keeps the workflow smooth.

제안: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes, which affect clarity. Avoid using incorrect or unclear words like "vampirize". Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to organise your points logically.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or believe their memory is reliable enough. Therefore, they see lists as unnecessary extra work.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant with good structure. To improve, try to use linking words to connect your ideas and add a bit more detail about why you prefer each method in different situations.

예시: When shopping, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to update. However, at work, I use paper lists since they are more visible and help me track tasks effectively.

× And yes, I do make a list of the things when when I go out shopping.

✓ And yes, I do make a list of things when I go out shopping.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'things' here. When speaking generally about items, the article should be omitted. Also, the repeated word 'when' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× It helps me to get all the things that I want and also to stay organized and focused on the thing that I really want for my home.

✓ It helps me to get all the things that I want and also to stay organized and focused on the things that I really want for my home.

The phrase 'focused on the thing' is incorrect because it refers to multiple items. The plural 'things' should be used to match the context.

× I just I work as a chef and maintaining a a prep list is essential for a constant flow of work in my workplace.

✓ I work as a chef, and maintaining a prep list is essential for a constant flow of work in my workplace.

The sentence has redundant words ('I just I') and a repeated article ('a a'). These should be removed for clarity and correctness. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the two independent clauses.

× So we make a list of things to do every day that keeps us organized.

✓ So we make a list of things to do every day that keep us organized.

The relative clause 'that keeps us organized' refers to 'things', which is plural, so the verb should be 'keep' to agree in number.

× I felt some of the people think that it might be some extra burden or they feel like they can vampirize all the tasks or thing and they might feel like their memory is good enough and making list is an extra.

✓ I feel some people think that it might be an extra burden or they feel like they can manage all the tasks or things and they might feel like their memory is good enough and making a list is unnecessary.

The sentence has tense inconsistency ('felt' should be 'feel'), incorrect word choice ('vampirize' is incorrect), singular/plural mismatch ('thing' should be 'things'), and missing articles ('making list' should be 'making a list'). These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× For shopping purposes, when I'm going out, I prefer to make a list on my phone as a phone is more convenient way to carry around.

✓ For shopping purposes, when I'm going out, I prefer to make a list on my phone as the phone is a more convenient way to carry around.

The phrase 'a phone is more convenient way' is incorrect because 'way' is singular and needs an article 'a', and 'phone' should be preceded by 'the' to specify the device already mentioned.