List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has good ideas but contains several language errors and unclear phrases such as 'make a colleague' and 'improved buying'. To improve, use correct vocabulary and grammar, and organise your answer clearly with linking words. For example, say 'I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything important. This helps me stay within my budget and avoid unnecessary purchases. I usually categorise items by store section for efficiency, and I use a shopping app to keep track of my list.'

예시: I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything important. This helps me stay within my budget and avoid unnecessary purchases. Additionally, I categorise items by store section for efficiency, and I use a shopping app to keep track of my list.

제안: Your answer conveys the main idea but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing such as 'I definitely am a colleague' and 'check up completely tasks'. To improve, use correct expressions and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me stay organised and focus on my tasks. I use a digital app that sends me reminders. As a result, my productivity increases and I feel a sense of accomplishment when I complete tasks.'

예시: I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me stay organised and focus on my tasks. I use a digital app that sends me reminders. As a result, my productivity increases and I feel a sense of accomplishment when I complete tasks.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains errors such as 'this making' and 'remember talk'. To improve, clarify your ideas and use appropriate vocabulary and linking words. For example, say 'Some people find making lists time-consuming. They are confident in their memory and prefer not to spend time writing things down because they want to focus on their important work.'

예시: Some people find making lists time-consuming. They are confident in their memory and prefer not to spend time writing things down because they want to focus on their important work.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but has some language errors like 'make clear' and 'share my list with other easy'. To improve, use correct phrases and linking words for coherence. For example, say 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me, which makes it more convenient. I can easily rearrange tasks on a digital list, and there are many apps that help me organise my lists better. Plus, I can easily share my lists with others through my phone.'

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me, which makes it more convenient. I can easily rearrange tasks on a digital list, and there are many apps that help me organise my lists better. Plus, I can easily share my lists with others through my phone.

× Yes, I always make a colleague when I go shopping to ensure I don't forget Anything important is help me stay within my budget and avoid improved buying.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important. It helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying.

The word 'colleague' is incorrectly used instead of 'list'. 'Anything' should not be capitalised mid-sentence. The phrase 'improved buying' is incorrect; the correct term is 'impulse buying'. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× I usually categorize item by section of store for efficient and I use a shopping app to keep track of my list.

✓ I usually categorize items by section of the store for efficiency, and I use a shopping app to keep track of my list.

The noun 'item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple things. 'Section of store' needs the definite article 'the' before 'store'. 'Efficient' is an adjective but the noun 'efficiency' is needed here. Also, a comma before 'and' improves sentence flow.

× I definitely am a colleague for my work because it helped me stay organized and focus on my task.

✓ I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me stay organised and focus on my tasks.

'Colleague' is incorrectly used instead of 'list'. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to match present tense. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' as it likely refers to multiple tasks.

× I use a digital app to keep track of my list which send me a reminder.

✓ I use a digital app to keep track of my list which sends me reminders.

The verb 'send' should be 'sends' to agree with the singular subject 'app'. 'Reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to indicate multiple notifications.

× I find that my productivity increases when I follow a list and I feel sense of accomplishment when I check up completely tasks.

✓ I find that my productivity increases when I follow a list, and I feel a sense of accomplishment when I completely check off tasks.

The phrase 'feel sense' is missing the article 'a'. 'Check up completely tasks' is awkward; the correct phrase is 'completely check off tasks'. A comma before 'and' improves readability.

× Some individuals perceive this making as time consuming.

✓ Some individuals perceive making lists as time-consuming.

'This making' is unclear; it should be 'making lists'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× They feel confident in their ability to remember talk without writing them down, and they would bother you that time to dive into their important work.

✓ They feel confident in their ability to remember tasks without writing them down, and they would rather not bother with that time to focus on their important work.

'Remember talk' is incorrect; it should be 'remember tasks'. 'Them' is unclear; 'tasks' is better. The phrase 'would bother you that time to dive into' is awkward and incorrect; 'would rather not bother with that time to focus on' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I prefer to make clear on my phone because it's always with me, making it more convenient.

✓ I prefer to make my list on my phone because it's always with me, making it more convenient.

'Make clear' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'make my list'. This clarifies the meaning and corrects the noun usage.

× I can easily rearrange my task on a digital list and there are a lot of apps that help me organize my list better.

✓ I can easily rearrange my tasks on a digital list, and there are a lot of apps that help me organise my list better.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' because multiple tasks are implied. A comma before 'and' improves sentence flow. 'Organize' is spelled 'organise' in British English.

× Plus I can share my list with other easy through my phone.

✓ Plus, I can share my list easily with others through my phone.

'Other easy' is incorrect; it should be 'easily with others'. The adverb 'easily' modifies the verb 'share', and 'others' is the correct pronoun for people.