List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains several grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'insure' instead of 'ensure', 'imposing buying' which is unclear, and 'categorize item by section of store for' which is incomplete. To improve, focus on correct verb forms, clearer vocabulary, and complete sentences. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important. This helps me stay within my budget and avoid unnecessary purchases. Additionally, I usually organise the items by the sections of the store to make shopping more efficient.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains several mistakes, such as 'I definitely am a colleague for my work' and 'withstand me. Reminder'. The meaning is difficult to understand. To improve, respond directly to the question with clear sentences, correct grammar, and relevant vocabulary. Explain how making lists helps your work with specific details and linking words.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organise my tasks and stay focused. I use a digital app to keep track of my to-do list, which also sends me reminders. As a result, my productivity has improved significantly.

제안: Your answer has several unclear and incorrect phrases, such as 'this making', 'confident in their fertility to remember attack', which confuse the meaning. To improve, use clear and accurate vocabulary, and explain reasons logically with linking words. Keep sentences concise and relevant.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. They trust their memory to remember tasks and prefer to spend their time focusing on important work instead.

제안: Your answer is somewhat understandable but contains many errors and incomplete sentences, such as 'I prefer my colleague on my phone', 'make it more convenient', 'digitalish', and the sentence ending abruptly. To improve, use correct vocabulary and grammar, complete your sentences, and use linking words to connect ideas clearly.

예시: I prefer to make my lists on my phone because it is always with me, which makes it more convenient. Also, I can easily rearrange items on a digital list, and there are many apps that help me organise my lists better. Plus, I can share my lists with others quickly.

× It help me stay within my budget and avoid imposing buying.

✓ It helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number. Also, 'imposing buying' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'impulse buying', which means buying on a whim.

× I usually categorize item by section of store for.

✓ I usually categorize items by section of the store.

The noun 'item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple things. Also, the phrase 'section of store for' is incorrect; it should be 'section of the store' to specify the location.

× Yes, I definitely am a colleague for my work because it's helped me organize and focus on my task.

✓ Yes, I definitely use a checklist for my work because it has helped me organize and focus on my tasks.

The word 'colleague' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'checklist'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks.

× I use a digital app to keep track of my list and withstand me. Reminder, I find it's my productivity increase when I fall asleep.

✓ I use a digital app to keep track of my list and remind me. I find my productivity increases when I use it.

'Withstand me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'remind me'. The second sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured; it should express that productivity increases when using the app, not when falling asleep.

× Some individuals perceive this making as time consuming, so they feel confident in their fertility to remember attack without writing them down, and they would rather use that time to dive into their important work.

✓ Some individuals perceive making lists as time-consuming, so they feel confident in their ability to remember tasks without writing them down, and they would rather use that time to focus on their important work.

'This making' is unclear; it should be 'making lists'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. 'Fertility' is incorrect; the correct word is 'ability'. 'Remember attack' is incorrect; it should be 'remember tasks'. 'Dive into' is informal and less appropriate than 'focus on' in this context.

× I prefer my colleague on my phone because it's always with me, make it more convenient, I can easily to rearrange my item on a digitalish and there are a lot of apps that help me organize my list better.

✓ I prefer my checklist on my phone because it's always with me, which makes it more convenient. I can easily rearrange my items on a digital list, and there are a lot of apps that help me organize my list better.

'Colleague' is incorrect; the intended word is 'checklist'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with 'which'. 'I can easily to rearrange' is incorrect; 'to' should be removed. 'Item' should be plural 'items'. 'Digitalish' is not a word; it should be 'digital list' or 'digital app'.

× Plus I can share my list without.

✓ Plus, I can share my list easily with others.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'without'. It should be completed to convey the intended meaning, such as 'share my list easily with others'.