List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to answer directly and clearly. Use simple and correct sentence structures. For example, say "I usually make a shopping list the day before to limit my purchases." Avoid unnecessary words and improve grammar for clarity.

예시: I usually make a shopping list the day before I go shopping. This helps me buy only what I need and avoid unnecessary items.

제안: Answer more clearly and organize your ideas. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why lists are not useful in your work. Use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect ideas.

예시: I don't make lists for my work because I am a nursing officer. My tasks depend on patients' conditions and emergencies, so it's not possible to plan everything in advance.

제안: Your answer is unclear and confusing. Try to express your ideas simply and logically. For example, explain that some people dislike lists because they prefer flexibility or find lists restrictive.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work freely without strict schedules. They feel lists can be too limiting for their style.

제안: Your answer is good but can be clearer and more natural. Use correct grammar and link ideas smoothly. For example, say "I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry during work."

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easy to carry with me during work. It helps me stay organized better than using paper lists.

× When I went to the shopping, I decided to what can I do for the shopping before the day.

✓ When I went shopping, I decided what I could do for the shopping before the day.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'to what can I do' which is not proper past tense or sentence structure. It should be 'what I could do' to correctly express past ability or intention. Also, 'to the shopping' is incorrect; 'shopping' is uncountable here and does not need 'the'.

× So I make list before the day of shopping and that was very limited amount of shopping.

✓ So I make a list before the day of shopping and that results in a very limited amount of shopping.

The noun 'list' is countable and requires an article 'a'. Also, 'that was very limited amount' lacks an article before 'very limited amount'. The sentence needs 'a very limited amount'.

× So I make list before the day of shopping and that was very limited amount of shopping.

✓ So I make a list before the day of shopping and that results in a very limited amount of shopping.

The sentence mixes present tense 'make' with past tense 'was'. To maintain consistency, either both should be past or present. Here, present tense is better for habitual action, so 'results' replaces 'was'.

× I think it's unnecessary for my work because I'm a nursing officer in that time.

✓ I think it's unnecessary for my work because I am a nursing officer at that time.

The phrase 'in that time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' for specific points in time. Also, 'I'm' is present tense, which is acceptable if referring to current status, but 'at that time' suggests past, so tense should be consistent.

× This, this, I can't make this list.

✓ I can't make this list.

The repetition 'This, this,' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity. The modal verb 'can't' is correctly used here to express inability.

× It depends on patient and condition, the emergency condition, we can't use this list.

✓ It depends on the patient and the condition; in emergency situations, we can't use this list.

The sentence lacks articles before 'patient' and 'condition'. Also, 'the emergency condition' is better expressed as 'in emergency situations' for clarity and correctness.

× So I didn't expect to make the list and I didn't use the list to make.

✓ So I didn't expect to make the list and I didn't use the list.

The phrase 'to make' at the end is redundant and incorrect. The past tense 'didn't expect' and 'didn't use' are correctly used, but the sentence should end after 'use the list'.

× Because they have to do their work as a schedule and it make them to work their list don't miss these events of their working style.

✓ Because they have to do their work according to a schedule, it makes them work with their list so they don't miss events in their working style.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and structure. 'As a schedule' should be 'according to a schedule'. 'It make' should be 'it makes' for subject-verb agreement. The phrase 'to work their list don't miss these events' is unclear and needs restructuring for clarity.

× So they like to do making list and work hard through the list.

✓ So they like making lists and work hard using the list.

The phrase 'to do making list' is incorrect; 'like making lists' is correct. Also, 'work hard through the list' is better expressed as 'work hard using the list'.

× I always like to make the listing on my phone because it's more convenient and it's easy to carry on for my work share time.

✓ I always like to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and easy to carry during my work shift.

'The listing' is incorrect; 'lists' is the correct plural noun. 'Carry on for my work share time' is unclear; 'carry during my work shift' is clearer and more natural.

× It's make me feel better than doing the list in this paper.

✓ It makes me feel better than making a list on paper.

'It's make' is incorrect; it should be 'It makes' for subject-verb agreement. 'Doing the list in this paper' is awkward; 'making a list on paper' is clearer and grammatically correct.