List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, "it avoids me saying any items" should be "it prevents me from forgetting any items." Also, avoid ending with vague phrases like "I guess it's a perfect way to." Try to be more precise and concise in your response.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and prevents me from forgetting any items. This way, I can shop efficiently without missing anything important.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes such as "my works" should be "my work" and "A making list" should be "Making a list." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, for example, "because" or "so."

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it always works well because it helps me visualize the amount of tasks and stay organized. Moreover, it allows me to prioritize my work effectively.

제안: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and lacks linking words. Instead of repeating "think," try to use synonyms or rephrase. Also, use linking words like "because" or "since" to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they believe it is unnecessary and time-consuming. Since listing takes extra time, they prefer to remember tasks mentally.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using articles correctly, for example, "on the phone" instead of "on phone." Also, try to combine sentences using linking words for better coherence.

예시: I prefer to make a list on the phone rather than on paper because it is more convenient to save the list digitally. Additionally, I can easily carry my phone with me instead of carrying papers.

× it avoids me saying any items when I shop

✓ it prevents me from forgetting any items when I shop

The phrase 'avoids me saying any items' is incorrect because 'avoid' is not used with a person as the object. Instead, 'prevent someone from doing something' is the correct structure. Here, 'prevents me from forgetting' correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× I guess it's a perfect way to.

✓ I guess it's a perfect way to do so.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'to' which requires an object or verb to complete the meaning. Adding 'do so' completes the phrase and makes it grammatically correct.

× I make a list for my works too and it always works great.

✓ I make a list for my work too and it always works great.

The word 'work' in this context is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'works'. Using 'work' singularly is correct when referring to tasks or job in general.

× A making list helps me to visualize the amount of work and helps me stay organized.

✓ Making a list helps me to visualize the amount of work and helps me stay organized.

The phrase 'A making list' is incorrect. The correct form is 'Making a list' where 'making' is a gerund acting as a noun and 'a list' is the object. The article 'A' should precede 'list' not 'making'.

× I prefer to make a list on phone instead of paper because it's much more convenient to save the list digitally.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone instead of on paper because it's much more convenient to save the list digitally.

The phrase 'on phone' is missing the possessive pronoun 'my' to specify whose phone. Also, 'instead of paper' should be 'instead of on paper' to maintain parallel prepositional phrases.

× I can just bring my phone with me instead of any papers.

✓ I can just bring my phone with me instead of any paper.

The word 'paper' in this context is uncountable when referring to sheets used for writing or printing. Using 'papers' implies multiple documents, which is not the intended meaning here.