List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连词连接细节，使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go. It helps me remember what to buy and avoid forgetting important items.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不准确，逻辑不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，使用连词连接观点和细节，具体说明如何利用清单安排时间。

예시: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me organize my tasks and manage my time efficiently.

제안: 表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点，使用连词连接原因和解释，使回答更连贯。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously. They trust their memory and feel lists are unnecessary.

제안: 回答含糊且语法错误严重，表达不完整。建议简化表达，明确说明偏好并给出具体理由，使用连词连接观点和细节。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. I can easily add or delete items and check tasks when I finish them.

× Yes, before I go shopping my mother always give me a lift about what should I buy during this shopping.

✓ Yes, before I go shopping my mother always gives me a lift about what I should buy during this shopping.

主语是单数的“my mother”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“gives”。此外，疑问句语序“what should I buy”在陈述句中应改为“what I should buy”。

× If I have the list I will buy things more. Easy.

✓ If I have the list, I will buy more things easily.

“things more”表达不自然，应改为“more things”；“Easy”作为副词应改为“easily”修饰动词。

× Yes, I think the list is more useful during my work.

✓ Yes, I think the list is more useful for my work.

“during”表示时间段，不适合此处，表达用途时应使用“for”。

× Before I begin today's study, I always make a list about what should I do and the time.

✓ Before I begin today's study, I always make a list of what I should do and the time.

“make a list about”不正确，正确搭配是“make a list of”。同时，“what should I do”应改为陈述语序“what I should do”。

× So my experience.

✓ So, in my experience.

原句缺少介词短语，导致表达不完整，应补充“in my experience”表示“根据我的经验”。

× According to the list I will depart my time.

✓ According to the list, I will allocate my time.

“depart my time”用词错误，应使用“allocate my time”表示“分配时间”。

× I think it's about the people's characteristic, because some people are more likely to do things according to their thoughts.

✓ I think it's about people's characteristics, because some people are more likely to do things according to their thoughts.

“the people's characteristic”中“the”不必要且“characteristic”应为复数“characteristics”。

× If they want to do things, they will do it.

✓ If they want to do things, they will do them.

“things”是复数，代词应使用复数“them”而非单数“it”。

× So I think such people may don't like make lists.

✓ So I think such people may not like to make lists.

情态动词“may”后应接动词原形，否定形式为“may not”，且“like”后应接不定式“to make”。

× Oh I always like to make the list on my phone because the phone can give me a more or more easy way to make my list such as like note or I can if I finish the task I will oh I will make some monk to.

✓ Oh, I always like to make the list on my phone because the phone can give me an easier way to make my list, such as notes. If I finish the task, I will...

“a more or more easy way”表达不正确，应改为“an easier way”；“note”应复数“notes”；句子后半部分不完整且含糊，应简化并断句。