List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤り（例えば、"it it"や"all the thing"）があり、自然な英語表現に改善が必要です。また、内容がやや冗長で、より簡潔に表現できます。

예시: I usually don't make a list when I shop, but if I have many items to buy, I make one because it's hard to remember everything.

제안: 回答は質問に答えていますが、"make the list"より"make a list"の方が自然です。また、"have the possibility to forget it"は不自然なので、より自然な表現に直しましょう。

예시: When I have many deadlines, I prefer to make a list because otherwise I might forget some tasks.

제안: 回答が曖昧で、文法的な誤り（"are comfort are confident"）があります。もっと明確で自然な表現を使い、理由を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel confident in their memory and prefer to remember things without writing them down.

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法ミス（"if the I if I"）や冗長な表現があります。より簡潔で正確な文に改善しましょう。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because if I write them on paper and forget it at home, I can't see it, but I always have my phone with me.

× I usually don't make it, but sometimes when I have many things to buy, I make the list because it it is difficult to memorize all the thing I have to buy.

✓ I usually don't make it, but sometimes when I have many things to buy, I make the list because it is difficult to memorize all the things I have to buy.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Using singular 'thing' here is incorrect when referring to multiple objects.

× Well, when I have many deadlines, I think it's better to make the list, because if I don't have the list, I have the possibility to forget it.

✓ Well, when I have many deadlines, I think it's better to make a list, because if I don't have a list, I might forget something.

The phrase 'the list' is incorrect here because the list is not previously specified; 'a list' is more appropriate. Also, 'the possibility to forget it' is awkward; 'might forget something' is clearer and more natural.

× Hmm yeah, I don't know. But umm, I think these people are comfort are confident with their memorizing skills.

✓ Hmm yeah, I don't know. But umm, I think these people are comfortable and confident with their memorizing skills.

The word 'comfort' is incorrectly used as an adjective; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'. Also, the phrase 'are comfort are confident' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'are comfortable and confident'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone if the I if I write the list on paper, umm, when I forgot it at home, I cannot see it, but I definitely don't forget the phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I write the list on paper and forget it at home, I cannot see it, but I definitely don't forget my phone.

The phrase 'if the I if I' is a typographical error and should be corrected to 'because if I'. Also, 'when I forgot it' should be 'if I forget it' to match the present/future context. 'Don't forget the phone' should be 'don't forget my phone' for clarity and correct pronoun use.