List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and ensure grammatical accuracy. Also, aim to use a wider range of vocabulary and avoid filler words like 'so' and repeated 'I'.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it makes the process easier and saves time. It serves as a quick reminder of what I need to buy, ensuring I don't forget anything important.

제안: Focus on clearer sentence construction and avoid vague phrases like 'that's the only thing what I'm looking for'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific examples. Also, correct grammar mistakes and avoid repetition.

예시: I haven't been able to make a work list yet, although I want to because it would make life easier. For example, I sometimes forget physiotherapy appointments, so having a schedule would help me remember important tasks.

제안: Work on clarity and avoid repeated words and filler phrases. Use precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting reasons, linked logically.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. However, lists usually save time by organising tasks. Others find writing lists burdensome or simply aren't interested in the process.

제안: Avoid filler words and repeated phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly. Improve sentence structure and grammar for better fluency and coherence.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I won't forget the list. In contrast, if I write a list on paper, I might leave it at home and forget it.

× it makes my shopping more easier and it, it's just saves my time

✓ it makes my shopping easier and it just saves my time

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective. Using 'more' with a comparative adjective is redundant. The correct form is simply 'easier'. Also, 'it's just saves' is incorrect; 'it just saves' is correct because 'saves' already includes the third person singular present tense.

× So this give me a quick note about what I need to, to do, what I need to buy from the shop and it just give me a quick reminder that I'm not forgetting anything

✓ So this gives me a quick note about what I need to do, what I need to buy from the shop and it just gives me a quick reminder that I'm not forgetting anything

The subject 'this' is singular, so the verb should be 'gives' instead of 'give' to agree in number. Also, the phrase 'to, to do' has a repeated 'to' which is unnecessary and should be corrected to 'to do'.

× Unfortunately, that's the only thing what I'm looking for

✓ Unfortunately, that's the only thing I'm looking for

The phrase 'the only thing what I'm looking for' is incorrect. The relative pronoun 'what' should be omitted here. The correct phrase is 'the only thing I'm looking for'.

× Sometimes like I take some physiotherapy appointments so I forgot appointment

✓ Sometimes I take some physiotherapy appointments but I forget the appointment

The sentence has tense inconsistency and missing articles. 'Forgot' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so 'forget' (present tense) is appropriate. Also, 'appointment' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the particular appointment.

× some people don't like for making a lace

✓ some people don't like making a list

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used after 'like'. The correct structure is 'like making' without 'for'. Also, 'lace' is a typo and should be 'list'.

× it could just spend their time more in making less

✓ it could just spend their time more in making lists

The word 'less' is a typo and should be 'lists' to make sense in context.

× when we make lace, it saves all the time

✓ when we make lists, it saves time

'lace' is a typo and should be 'lists'. Also, 'all the time' is awkward here; 'saves time' is the correct expression.

× they just think like it's a burden on them. So need to write it and spend time in writing and read

✓ they just think it's a burden on them, so they need to write it and spend time writing and reading

The phrase 'So need to write it' is missing the subject 'they'. Also, 'spend time in writing and read' should be 'spend time writing and reading' for parallel structure and correct verb forms.

× if I make list on paper, I will forgot forget it at my home

✓ if I make a list on paper, I will forget it at home

The phrase 'forgot forget' is incorrect; 'forget' is correct for future tense with 'will'. Also, 'make list' needs the article 'a' before 'list'. 'At my home' is better as 'at home'.

× it would be more easy for me

✓ it would be easier for me

The phrase 'more easy' is incorrect because 'easier' is the correct comparative form of 'easy'. Using 'more' with 'easy' is redundant.