List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えは質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があり、内容がやや不明瞭です。より自然で明確な表現を心がけ、文法ミスを減らしましょう。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to decide what to buy spontaneously at the store.

제안: 答えは質問に答えていますが、時制の誤りや不自然な表現があります。文法を正しく使い、より具体的な説明を加えると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it works well. It helps me focus on my assignments and complete tasks efficiently.

제안: 文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、自然な表現を使う練習をしましょう。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and prefer to work more flexibly, which they believe is more efficient.

제안: 答えは理解できますが、表現が不自然で意味が曖昧です。理由を明確にし、自然な英語表現を使うことを意識しましょう。

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because I always have my phone with me, and writing on paper feels safer and more reliable for organizing my schedule.

× No, I don't make a list when I shop because I don't really like decide what what I'm gonna buy something before I go to store or supermarket.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop because I don't really like deciding what I'm gonna buy before I go to the store or supermarket.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'deciding' to indicate preference. Also, 'what what' is a repetition error and 'something' is unnecessary here. Additionally, 'to store' needs the definite article 'the' before 'store'.

× Yes, I make a list for my work and it's worked.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and it works.

The sentence is about a habitual action, so the present tense 'works' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'worked'.

× It's helped to focus assignment or tasks.

✓ It helps to focus on assignments or tasks.

The present tense 'helps' fits better for a general statement. Also, 'focus' requires the preposition 'on', and 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the context.

× Because some people feel to be limited their schedule and they like to do freedomly and that they think it's efficiently.

✓ Because some people feel their schedule is limited and they like to be free, and they think it's more efficient.

The phrase 'feel to be limited their schedule' is incorrect; it should be 'feel their schedule is limited'. 'Do freedomly' is incorrect; 'be free' is appropriate. 'It's efficiently' should be 'it's more efficient' to use the correct adjective form.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I have phone everyday, every time and everywhere so it is more usually on safety to do schedule.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I have my phone every day, all the time, and everywhere, so it is usually safer to make a schedule that way.

The adverbs 'everyday', 'every time', and 'everywhere' need correction: 'everyday' should be 'every day' (two words), 'every time' is better expressed as 'all the time'. 'More usually on safety' is incorrect; 'usually safer' is the correct comparative adverb and adjective form. Also, 'do schedule' should be 'make a schedule'.