List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and slightly unnatural. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'make a list' and 'going to shopping'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 4-5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and stay organized. For instance, by preparing a list beforehand, I avoid forgetting important items and can shop more efficiently.

제안: Your answer has some grammar errors and unclear phrases like 'So you always make a schedule or least'. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and add linking words to explain how making lists helps you manage time and tasks.

예시: Yes, I usually make lists and schedules for my work because it helps me stay organized. Consequently, I can manage my tasks better and save time, which improves my productivity.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid phrases like 'According to my mind' and 'they are more good'. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and feel that lists restrict their freedom. Moreover, they might find lists confusing or irritating when they have many tasks to handle.

제안: Your answer is good but a bit wordy and has some grammar issues. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating words like 'mobile phone' unnecessarily.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily access my list anytime and anywhere, which is very convenient in today's digital age.

× Yes, every time I make a list whenever I have to go to shopping because with the help of list I can easily save my time and it's more convenient for me before going to shopping.

✓ Yes, every time I make a list whenever I have to go shopping because with the help of a list I can easily save my time and it's more convenient for me before going shopping.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; 'go shopping' is the correct form as 'shopping' acts as a verb here. Also, 'with the help of list' needs an article 'a' before 'list'. The phrase 'before going to shopping' should be 'before going shopping' for correct verb + -ing form usage.

× Yes, every time I make a list whenever I have to go to shopping because with the help of list I can easily save my time and it's more convenient for me before going to shopping.

✓ Yes, every time I make a list whenever I have to go shopping because with the help of a list I can easily save my time and it's more convenient for me before going shopping.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting the article leads to incorrect grammar.

× So I am organize everything related to my work, related to my other activities.

✓ So I organize everything related to my work, related to my other activities.

The phrase 'I am organize' is incorrect; it should be 'I organize'. The auxiliary verb 'am' is not needed here. This is a verb form issue rather than article, but the sentence also lacks the article 'a' before 'list' in the previous sentence.

× So you always make a schedule or least what I have to do because it's it became more manageable as well as it's also more time saving for me and it's helped me more.

✓ So I always make a schedule or at least what I have to do because it becomes more manageable as well as it's also more time-saving for me and it helps me more.

The phrase 'it's it became' is incorrect; 'it becomes' fits present tense. 'Time saving' should be hyphenated as 'time-saving' when used as an adjective. Also, 'you always make' should be 'I always make' to match the subject. 'Least' should be 'at least'. The verb 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense.

× So you always make a schedule or least what I have to do because it's it became more manageable as well as it's also more time saving for me and it's helped me more.

✓ So I always make a schedule or at least what I have to do because it becomes more manageable as well as it's also more time-saving for me and it helps me more.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here as the speaker is talking about themselves. It should be 'I' to maintain consistency.

× According to my mind, I think so.

✓ In my opinion, I think so.

The phrase 'According to my mind' is incorrect English. The correct expression is 'In my opinion' to express personal thoughts.

× Some people don't like to making lists because they think that they want to do their work on time and they want to engage in more other activities as well as they think that they are more good without making list.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think that they want to do their work on time and they want to engage in more other activities as well as they think that they are better without making lists.

The phrase 'don't like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making' because 'like' is followed by the gerund form. Also, 'more good' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'better'. 'Making list' should be 'making lists' to match plural form.

× Some people don't like to making lists because they think that they want to do their work on time and they want to engage in more other activities as well as they think that they are more good without making list.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think that they want to do their work on time and they want to engage in more other activities as well as they think that they are better without making lists.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to be consistent with the earlier plural usage. Also, 'more other activities' is awkward; 'more activities' or 'other activities' would be better, but since it is not in the problem list, it is left as is.

× Some people don't like to making lists because they think that they want to do their work on time and they want to engage in more other activities as well as they think that they are more good without making list.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think that they want to do their work on time and they want to engage in more other activities as well as they think that they are better without making lists.

The phrase 'making list' needs the plural form 'lists' and the article usage is corrected accordingly.

× Well, in this contemporary era everyone is using technological gadgets and am also very interested in that to using technological tools.

✓ Well, in this contemporary era everyone is using technological gadgets and I am also very interested in using technological tools.

The sentence misses the subject pronoun 'I' before 'am'. Also, 'interested in that to using' is incorrect; it should be 'interested in using' as 'interested in' is followed by a gerund.

× Well, in this contemporary era everyone is using technological gadgets and am also very interested in that to using technological tools.

✓ Well, in this contemporary era everyone is using technological gadgets and I am also very interested in using technological tools.

The pronoun 'I' is missing before 'am'. Pronouns are necessary to indicate the subject of the verb.

× And a majority of time I'm making my list on my mobile phone because one of my mobile phone is one of my favorite thing which I always have with me.

✓ And the majority of the time I'm making my list on my mobile phone because my mobile phone is one of my favorite things which I always have with me.

The phrase 'a majority of time' should be 'the majority of the time' to correctly use the definite article. Also, 'one of my mobile phone' is incorrect; it should be 'my mobile phone'. 'Favorite thing' should be plural 'favorite things' to match 'one of'.

× And a majority of time I'm making my list on my mobile phone because one of my mobile phone is one of my favorite thing which I always have with me.

✓ And the majority of the time I'm making my list on my mobile phone because my mobile phone is one of my favorite things which I always have with me.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it follows 'one of my', which refers to a member of a group.