List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并避免重复和语法错误。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

제안: 回答基本清楚，但语法和表达有待改进。建议使用更自然的表达，并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a list before going to work because it helps me stay organized and improves my efficiency.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并改正语法错误。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because it makes them feel pressured, or they believe it's unnecessary and prefer to do tasks spontaneously.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但表达有些重复且用词不准确。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier for me, but since I often forget to bring the paper, I now use my phone to keep my lists so I can check them anytime.

× I usually go to the supermarket in order to buy something I am interested in.

✓ I usually go to the supermarket in order to buy things I am interested in.

这里的'something'应该用复数形式'things'，因为表达的是一般性的兴趣物品，复数更合适。

× But maybe not, I am so need.

✓ But maybe not, I don't really need to.

原句中'I am so need'结构错误，'need'是动词，不能直接用作形容词，且缺少助动词，正确表达应为'I don't really need to'。

× Yes, sometimes I make a list when before I go to work because I believe that the list makes me work more efficient.

✓ Yes, sometimes I make a list before I go to work because I believe that the list makes me work more efficiently.

'when before'结构重复，应去掉'when'；'more efficient'应改为副词形式'more efficiently'修饰动词'work'。

× I guess maybe making a list makes they feel pressured or they just think that there is no need to make a list before they go to work, they just do it.

✓ I guess maybe making a list makes them feel pressured or they just think that there is no need to make a list before they go to work; they just do it.

'makes they feel'中的'we'应为宾格'them'，且句子中应使用分号或句号分隔两个独立分句。

× Actually I like to make a list on the paper, but usually I don't remember to take the paper with me, so I cannot check my list all the time.

✓ Actually I like to make a list on paper, but usually I don't remember to take the paper with me, so I cannot check my list all the time.

'on the paper'中'the'不必要，习惯用法是'on paper'。

× So now I prefer to make a list on the forms so that I can check my list all the time whenever I want to.

✓ So now I prefer to make a list on the phone so that I can check my list all the time whenever I want to.

'forms'应为'phone'，原句中拼写错误导致语义不清。