List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. To improve, avoid repeating words and try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, keep your sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I am a highly organized person, so I always make a list before shopping. This helps me save time because I know exactly what to buy.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. To improve, complete your sentences and use linking words to explain how making lists helps you. Also, avoid repeating words and clarify your points.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize tasks. For example, last week I listed my tasks and finished the most important ones first, which improved my productivity.

제안: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrasing. To improve, express your ideas clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work freely without strict structure. They might find lists restrictive and prefer a more flexible approach.

제안: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and lacks linking words. To improve, organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your reasons.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, and it's more convenient than carrying pen and paper.

× I value my time by doing doing the list beforehand because it helps me to easily know what I'm going to buy.

✓ I value my time by doing the list beforehand because it helps me to easily know what I'm going to buy.

The phrase 'doing doing' contains a repeated word which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate 'doing' corrects the sentence. This is related to the correct use of the verb + -ing form.

× Yes, making a list for my work I. Effects how I work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize what I needed to prioritize.

✓ Yes, making a list for my work affects how I work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize what I need to prioritize.

The original sentence has a misplaced period and incorrect verb form 'Effects' instead of 'affects'. Also, 'needed' should be 'need' to maintain present tense consistency. Correcting these improves sentence structure and subject-verb agreement.

× There are different kind of individuals.

✓ There are different kinds of individuals.

The phrase 'different kind' should be pluralized to 'different kinds' because 'different' implies multiple types. Also, 'of' should follow 'kinds' to be grammatically correct.

× Perhaps people who don't like making list.

✓ Perhaps people who don't like making lists.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists, not just one.

× They have reason why, reasons why.

✓ They have reasons why.

The phrase is redundant and incomplete. 'They have reasons why' is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× Maybe one of one of the reason is they don't want to work in a in a structured setting, they want to work in a freely mode.

✓ Maybe one of the reasons is they don't want to work in a structured setting; they want to work in a free mode.

'One of one of the reason' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be 'one of the reasons'. Also, 'freely mode' is incorrect; 'free mode' is the correct adjective-noun combination. The sentence is also improved by replacing the comma with a semicolon to separate independent clauses.

× Maybe one of one of the reason is they don't want to work in a in a structured setting, they want to work in a freely mode.

✓ Maybe one of the reasons is they don't want to work in a structured setting; they want to work in a free mode.

The phrase 'in a in a' is a repeated preposition and article, which is incorrect. Removing the duplicate 'in a' corrects the prepositional phrase.

× Maybe one of one of the reason is they don't want to work in a in a structured setting, they want to work in a freely mode.

✓ Maybe one of the reasons is they don't want to work in a structured setting; they want to work in a free mode.

The word 'freely' is an adverb but is incorrectly used to modify the noun 'mode'. The correct adjective form 'free' should be used instead.

× Perhaps people who don't like making list.

✓ Perhaps people who don't like making lists.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists, not just one.

× I prefer using my phone when making a list because one first is I always use my phone and it's handy and you won't have pen and paper all the time so I prefer using my phone.

✓ I prefer using my phone when making a list because, first, I always use my phone and it's handy, and you won't always have pen and paper with you, so I prefer using my phone.

The phrase 'one first is I always use my phone' is awkward and unclear. Replacing it with 'first' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'you won't have pen and paper all the time' is improved by adding 'always' and 'with you' for clarity and correctness in pronoun use.