List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, instead of 'the list of something that I should buy is the most convenient and comfortable way for me to not forget something,' say 'making a list helps me remember what to buy and is very convenient.'

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I have a poor memory. It helps me remember everything I need and makes shopping more efficient.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'that that works and how much before.'

예시: I sometimes make a to-do list for my work, especially to prioritize urgent tasks. This method helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. For example, explain that some people prefer flexibility and spontaneity over strict plans.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be flexible and spontaneous. They feel that strict plans limit their creativity and sense of adventure.

제안: Your answer has many fillers and unclear phrases. Try to speak more fluently and clearly. Also, explain why phone apps are convenient with specific reasons.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because apps offer useful features like reminders and easy editing, which make planning faster and more convenient.

× the list of something that I should buy is the most convenient and comfortable way for me to not forget something

✓ the list of things that I should buy is the most convenient and comfortable way for me to not forget anything

The phrase 'something' is singular and vague; using 'things' (plural) is more appropriate when referring to multiple items to buy. Also, 'something' at the end is vague; 'anything' fits better in negative contexts to indicate any item might be forgotten.

× Sometimes I just make a plan of what I need to do, what is necessary right now, and of course that that works and how much before.

✓ Sometimes I just make a plan of what I need to do, what is necessary right now, and of course that works and how much time I have before.

The original sentence is confusing and incomplete. The phrase 'that that works and how much before' is unclear. Adding 'time I have' clarifies the meaning, and removing the repeated 'that' corrects the structure.

× I guess some people dislike that because they're they have flexible graphics and that plans may broaden their horizons and adventurous way to do something.

✓ I guess some people dislike that because they have flexible schedules and think that plans may limit their horizons and adventurous ways to do something.

The phrase 'they're they have' is incorrect; it should be 'they have'. 'Flexible graphics' is incorrect; 'flexible schedules' is appropriate. Also, 'that plans may broaden their horizons and adventurous way' is contradictory; plans may limit rather than broaden horizons, so correction reflects intended meaning.

× For me, uh, it is much more preferable to uh, use the phone to make a plan, cause some maybe applications have these uh, functions to make graphic uh, fast and convenient.

✓ For me, it is much more preferable to use the phone to make a plan, because some applications have functions to make graphics fast and convenient.

The phrase 'cause some maybe applications' is incorrect; 'because some applications' is correct. Also, 'to make graphic' should be 'to make graphics'. Removing filler words improves clarity.