List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it can be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "very often whenever" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me focus on what I need rather than what I want. Moreover, it keeps me organised and saves time by preventing unnecessary purchases.

제안: Your answer addresses the question well but can be improved by simplifying complex sentences and using clearer linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "loads of tasks which may not be monotonous" and be more specific about how lists help you.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because I have many different tasks to complete. They help me organise my duties and delegate some tasks to my assistant, ensuring I meet deadlines efficiently.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrases like "prefer to be monotonous" and "lethargic enough." Try to express ideas more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, provide more specific reasons with linking words.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer a more spontaneous approach to tasks. Additionally, they might find lists restrictive or feel too lazy to prepare them, which affects their organisation.

제안: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Avoid awkward phrasing like "depending on the availability at the time of the thing I want to be listed." Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I prefer making lists both on paper and on my phone, depending on the situation. For example, if I'm on a call and need to note something quickly, I use my phone. However, when I'm at my desk, I like writing ideas down on paper.

× Yes, as a shopaholic, I prefer using lists very often whenever I am shopping.

✓ Yes, as a shopaholic, I very often prefer to use lists whenever I am shopping.

The verb 'prefer' is usually followed by the infinitive form 'to use' rather than the gerund 'using'. So, 'prefer to use' is more grammatically correct here.

× It helps me navigate the things that I need instead of the things I end up wanting to buy.

✓ It helps me navigate the things that I need instead of the things I end up wanting to buy.

This sentence is correct in preposition usage; no correction needed.

× It also helps me clear my head to get things done on a certain time with the help of the list.

✓ It also helps me clear my head to get things done within a certain time with the help of the list.

The correct preposition to indicate a time frame is 'within' rather than 'on' when referring to a period or deadline.

× Yes, as an organized person, I use a list for my work as my work involves loads of tasks which may not be monotonous and need to be delegated to an assistant or an associate to get it done.

✓ Yes, as an organized person, I use a list for my work as my work involves loads of tasks which may not be monotonous and need to be delegated to an assistant or an associate to get them done.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'tasks' which is plural, so it should be 'them' to agree in number.

× It also helps me to get things done within a certain time frame as I have to meet certain deadlines.

✓ It also helps me to get things done within a certain time frame as I have to meet certain deadlines.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× It might be depending on their personalities.

✓ It might depend on their personalities.

The verb 'depend' should be in base form after 'might'; 'might be depending' is incorrect here.

× Some prefer to be organized and they get things done easily while some prefer to be monotonous and they also yield same results.

✓ Some prefer to be organized and get things done easily, while others prefer to be monotonous and also yield the same results.

The sentence needed clearer conjunction use and pronoun consistency; 'others' is better than repeating 'some', and 'the same results' requires the definite article 'the'.

× They may also be lethargic enough to not make a list.

✓ They may also be too lethargic to make a list.

The phrase 'lethargic enough to not make' is awkward; 'too lethargic to make' is the correct idiomatic expression.

× I prefer to make a list on both paper as well as of my phone, depending on the availability at the time of the thing I want to be listed.

✓ I prefer to make a list on both paper as well as on my phone, depending on the availability at the time of the thing I want to list.

The preposition 'on' is used with both 'paper' and 'phone'; 'of my phone' is incorrect. Also, 'want to be listed' should be 'want to list'.

× For instance, if I am on call and I receive something important to note it down, I won't have a notebook.

✓ For instance, if I am on a call and I receive something important to note down, I won't have a notebook.

The phrase 'on call' needs the article 'a' to specify 'a call'. Also, 'note it down' is better as 'note down' in this context.

× I would use a phone rather.

✓ I would rather use a phone.

The adverb 'rather' should precede the verb phrase 'use a phone' for correct word order.

× But if I am having ideas on my study desk, I will write it on a paper.

✓ But if I am having ideas at my study desk, I will write them on paper.

The correct preposition for location is 'at' rather than 'on' for 'study desk'. Also, 'write it on a paper' should be 'write them on paper' because 'ideas' is plural and 'paper' is uncountable here.