List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không được truyền đạt một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I see shopping as a fun activity. I prefer to buy things spontaneously, depending on what I like and my budget at the moment.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng và có ví dụ minh họa, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng, số nhiều số ít phù hợp và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list to help me stay organized and focused on my tasks. For instance, when I have a busy day, the list ensures I don't forget important things and helps me be more productive.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không chính xác. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously. They might feel that lists limit their freedom and creativity.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không được truyền đạt rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and flexible. I can easily add or delete items anytime, unlike paper lists.

× I don't really want to make a list when I when I go shopping because I think the shopping is an entertainment activity.

✓ I don't really want to make a list when I go shopping because I think shopping is an entertainment activity.

The phrase 'the shopping' is incorrect here because 'shopping' as an activity does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, the repeated phrase 'when I' is redundant and should be removed for clarity.

× So I don't want to make a reassure me that I have to buy on a list.

✓ So I don't want to reassure myself that I have to buy from a list.

The original sentence misuses 'make a reassure me' which is grammatically incorrect. The correct reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used with 'reassure' to indicate the subject is performing the action on themselves.

× So I will if I have money and then when I go to shopping I will buy it in maybe one thing I would like I will buy.

✓ So if I have money, when I go shopping, I will buy maybe one thing I like.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'buy it in maybe one thing' is awkward and should be rephrased for clarity.

× I usually make a list to ensure that I will stay early nights and focus on my tests.

✓ I usually make a list to ensure that I will go to bed early and focus on my tests.

The phrase 'stay early nights' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go to bed early' to indicate sleeping early at night.

× However, I sometimes work quite spontaneously, so making a list help me control the habit and be more productive.

✓ However, I sometimes work quite spontaneously, so making a list helps me control the habit and be more productive.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'.

× For example, when I have a busy day, making a list ensure that I don't forget important things.

✓ For example, when I have a busy day, making a list ensures that I don't forget important things.

The verb 'ensure' should be 'ensures' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'.

× Or maybe because it's the suitable with a word ethic.

✓ Or maybe because it doesn't suit their work ethic.

The phrase 'it's the suitable with a word ethic' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'it doesn't suit their work ethic' to convey incompatibility.

× Because maybe they are really generous and making intent to work quite spontaneously so making a list make them feel like they are have a virtual and they can do anything with all of their best.

✓ Because maybe they are really generous and intend to work quite spontaneously, so making a list makes them feel like they have a virtual restriction and they can't do their best.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'making intent' should be 'intend'; 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject; 'they are have a virtual' is incorrect and unclear, likely meant 'they have a virtual restriction'; also, the meaning is clarified to express that lists feel restrictive.

× I prefer to make a plane on my floor inspire a real like the feeling when I make a plane on the paper all but making a pen on the phone is more convenient and have and, uh, it says can be flexible what it is and whether you want to train it.

✓ I prefer to make a plan on my phone because I like the feeling when I make a plan on paper, but making a plan on the phone is more convenient and flexible depending on what it is and whether you want to change it.

The original sentence has many errors: 'plane' should be 'plan'; 'on my floor' should be 'on my phone'; 'inspire a real like the feeling' is unclear and corrected to 'because I like the feeling'; 'making a pen' should be 'making a plan'; 'it says can be flexible' is corrected to 'it is more flexible'; 'train it' is corrected to 'change it' for clarity.

× I can just open my phone and set up to, uh, write again.

✓ I can just open my phone and start writing again.

The phrase 'set up to, uh, write again' is awkward. 'Start writing again' is a clearer and more natural expression.