List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，时态使用不准确，且句子较长且有些重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意时态一致，避免冗余。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping. I prefer to browse around and enjoy the experience because shopping helps me relax. Making a list might make me feel stressed.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如动词单复数不一致，表达不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I do make lists for my daily tasks, especially for studying. They really help me because they remind me of important deadlines and improve my time management skills.

제안: 回答中表达不够简洁，句子结构重复，且部分表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they struggle with time management. Also, making lists can make them feel anxious.

제안: 回答中表达稍显复杂，部分词汇使用不准确。建议简化表达，使用更准确的词汇，并注意句子连贯性。

예시: I use both paper and my phone to make lists. I write general plans on paper, but I put important deadlines on my phone using apps like Days Matter to remind me.

× No I don't think so, when I went to shopping mall I usually do some kind of window shopping and I think shop is a very good way for relax.

✓ No, I don't think so. When I go to the shopping mall, I usually do some kind of window shopping and I think shopping is a very good way to relax.

这里的时间状语是一般现在时（usually），所以动词应该用一般现在时。'went'是过去式，与句意不符。'shop'应改为动名词'shopping'，'for relax'应改为'to relax'。

× No I don't think so, when I went to shopping mall I usually do some kind of window shopping and I think shop is a very good way for relax.

✓ No, I don't think so. When I go to the shopping mall, I usually do some kind of window shopping and I think shopping is a very good way to relax.

'shopping mall'前缺少定冠词'the'，因为特指某个购物中心。

× No I don't think so, when I went to shopping mall I usually do some kind of window shopping and I think shop is a very good way for relax.

✓ No, I don't think so. When I go to the shopping mall, I usually do some kind of window shopping and I think shopping is a very good way to relax.

'shop'应改为动名词'shopping'，表示购物活动。

× Yes sure, I make a list for some daily schedule for especially studying and I think it really works because it remind me of some very important deadlines and raise my ability on self time management.

✓ Yes, sure. I make a list for some daily schedules, especially for studying, and I think it really works because it reminds me of some very important deadlines and improves my ability in self time management.

'remind'应为第三人称单数形式'reminds'，因为主语是'it'。'raise'应改为'improves'或'raises'，但这里用'improves'更合适。'schedule'应为复数'schedules'，因为指多个日程。

× Yes sure, I make a list for some daily schedule for especially studying and I think it really works because it remind me of some very important deadlines and raise my ability on self time management.

✓ Yes, sure. I make a list for some daily schedules, especially for studying, and I think it really works because it reminds me of some very important deadlines and improves my ability in self time management.

'raise my ability on self time management'中' on'用法不当，应改为'in'，表示在某方面的能力。

× Well, actually I make a list using those two methods. So I will write down a timeline on the paper and I will switch some very important deadline to my phone with the support of some certain fun apps like Days Matter to remind myself.

✓ Well, actually I make a list using those two methods. So I will write down a timeline on paper and I will transfer some very important deadlines to my phone with the support of certain fun apps like Days Matter to remind myself.

'on the paper'应改为'on paper'，表示用纸写。'switch some very important deadline to my phone'表达不准确，改为'transfer some very important deadlines to my phone'更合适。'some certain'重复，去掉'some'。'deadline'应为复数'deadlines'。