List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific reasons. For example, mention how making a list helps you stay organized and saves time.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need and saves time at the store.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and explain your opinion with reasons. Avoid incorrect phrases like 'beast of a time' and 'go with flu'.

예시: I don't usually make lists for my work because I prefer to be flexible and handle tasks as they come, which I find more effective for me.

제안: Improve clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time and prefer to be spontaneous instead.

제안: Try to use correct tenses and avoid minor errors. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and give a specific example.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, and I can easily check it. Once, I lost my paper list, which caused some problems.

× I make a list when I go for the shopping uh, about the various product because I'm not able to uh, remember all the things that I want to buy.

✓ I make a list when I go shopping, about the various products because I'm not able to remember all the things that I want to buy.

The word 'product' should be plural 'products' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'go for the shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. This is a common pluralization and phrase usage error.

× I personally believe that go with the flow.

✓ I personally believe in going with the flow.

The phrase 'believe that go with the flow' is incorrect. The verb 'believe' should be followed by a gerund or a clause. Here, 'believe in going with the flow' is correct. This is an error in verb usage and sentence structure.

× I do not make a list related to my work or study because I think it is not a beneficial.

✓ I do not make a list related to my work or study because I think it is not beneficial.

The article 'a' before 'beneficial' is incorrect because 'beneficial' is an adjective, not a noun. The correct phrase is 'not beneficial' without 'a'. This is an error in article and adjective usage.

× It is a beast of a time and efforts.

✓ It is a waste of time and effort.

The phrase 'beast of a time and efforts' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or misuse. The correct phrase is 'waste of time and effort'. Also, 'efforts' should be singular 'effort' in this context. This is a pluralization and phrase error.

× So I go with flu.

✓ So I go with the flow.

The phrase 'go with flu' is incorrect. The correct idiom is 'go with the flow'. This is an error in phrase usage.

× Some people don't like a meeting list because they think that it is a waste of time and efforts.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think that it is a waste of time and effort.

The phrase 'a meeting list' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'. Also, 'efforts' should be singular 'effort' in this context. This is a pluralization and word form error.

× They want to go with flow.

✓ They want to go with the flow.

The phrase 'go with flow' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'go with the flow'. This is an article usage error.

× They cannot. They do not want to waste their their time.

✓ They cannot. They do not want to waste their time.

The word 'their' is repeated twice. This is a typographical error involving pronouns.

× I personally prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because my mobile phone was always with me and I can easily check the list.

✓ I personally prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because my mobile phone is always with me and I can easily check the list.

The verb tense 'was always' is incorrect here; it should be present tense 'is always' to indicate a habitual action. This is a tense usage error.

× But sometime I replaced my paper and after that I couldn't find it so it create a problem.

✓ But sometimes I replaced my paper list and after that I couldn't find it, so it created a problem.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'create' should be past tense 'created' to match the past action. Adding 'list' after 'paper' clarifies meaning. This is an error in adverb usage and past tense.