List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and a bit contradictory. You say you never make a list but then mention having a very standard list. Try to clarify your point directly and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I usually don't make a shopping list because I always remember the items I need, especially dairy products and nutrients, as I buy them regularly.

제안: Your answer has many fillers and is somewhat disorganized. Try to speak more fluently and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Avoid unnecessary pauses and filler words.

예시: I am trying to develop the habit of making a to-do list for work, which is challenging, but I use my diary daily to keep track of tasks.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains many fillers and repetitive phrases. Try to use linking words effectively and express your ideas more naturally and concisely.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because it can feel boring and seeing all tasks at once might cause frustration and increase stress levels.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid repeating words like 'to'.

예시: It depends on the day; when I'm busy or tired, I use my phone to make lists, but usually, I write them in my diary daily.

× Yeah, I'm still trying to implement a habit of making A to do list, but that's a bit, uh, challenging for me, Uh, but although I have my own diary where I write some things every day, uh, to follow them, so.

✓ Yeah, I'm still trying to implement a habit of making a to-do list, but that's a bit, uh, challenging for me. Although I have my own diary where I write some things every day to follow them.

The phrase 'making A to do list' contains an unnecessary capital 'A' and lacks hyphens in 'to-do list'. Also, the sentence is a run-on with repeated conjunctions 'but' and 'although' causing confusion. Correcting capitalization, punctuation, and removing redundant conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yeah, I'm still trying to implement a habit of making A to do list, but that's a bit, uh, challenging for me, Uh, but although I have my own diary where I write some things every day, uh, to follow them, so.

✓ Yeah, I'm still trying to implement a habit of making a to-do list, but that's a bit, uh, challenging for me. Although I have my own diary where I write some things every day to follow them.

The phrase 'making A to do list' incorrectly uses a capital 'A' and omits the article 'a' before 'to-do list'. The correct form is 'a to-do list' with lowercase 'a' and hyphens. Proper article usage is essential for grammatical accuracy.

× Well actually depends on the day.

✓ Well, it actually depends on the day.

The original sentence lacks the subject 'it' and a comma after 'Well'. Adding 'it' clarifies the subject, and the comma improves readability. Prepositions are not directly involved here, but sentence structure requires correction for clarity.

× When I'm busy or extremely exhausted I just put a list in my phone.

✓ When I'm busy or extremely exhausted, I just put a list on my phone.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to placing something on a device like a phone. The correct preposition is 'on' to indicate the list is stored or saved on the phone's interface.

× However, I have a diary and I try to to put some things there on a daily basis.

✓ However, I have a diary and I try to put some things there on a daily basis.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'to to'. Removing the duplicate 'to' corrects the sentence. The preposition 'there' is correctly used to indicate the diary as the place where things are put.