List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“after I'm shopping”应为“before I go shopping”，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything important.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更准确的时态和连接词，使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I study because it helps me manage my time better and complete tasks on schedule.

제안: 回答中存在多处语法和拼写错误，如“trouble”应为“troublesome”，“difficult to finished”应为“difficult to finish”，“making least”应为“making lists”。建议加强语法基础，注意拼写和句子结构。

예시: Some people might find making lists troublesome and time-consuming, but I believe it's a useful habit because it helps me remember even small tasks.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“I prefer make”应为“I prefer to make”，以及“it's depend”应为“it depends”。建议注意动词不定式的使用和主谓一致。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and faster, especially when I'm busy. However, sometimes I use paper lists because they help me remember better.

× after I'm shopping I always make a list because it can help me know what I should buy and also can remind me don't forget to buy something.

✓ after I have shopped I always make a list because it can help me know what I should buy and also can remind me not to forget to buy something.

这里的“after I'm shopping”时态不正确，应该用完成时态“after I have shopped”表示动作完成后再做后续动作。此外，“remind me don't forget”结构错误，应该用“remind me not to forget”表示提醒不要忘记。

× remind me don't forget to buy something.

✓ remind me not to forget to buy something.

“remind me don't forget”中“don't forget”是祈使句，作为宾语从句时应使用不定式结构“not to forget”，这是英语中常见的固定搭配。

× Maybe some people think it's really trouble and difficult to finished, but in my opinion making least it's a really good habit.

✓ Maybe some people think it's really troublesome and difficult to finish, but in my opinion making lists is a really good habit.

“really trouble”应改为形容词“really troublesome”；“difficult to finished”中“finished”应为动词原形“finish”；“making least”应为“making lists”，且“making lists is”更符合语法。

× Maybe some people think it's really trouble and difficult to finished, but in my opinion making least it's a really good habit.

✓ Maybe some people think it's really troublesome and difficult to finish, but in my opinion making lists is a really good habit.

“difficult to finished”中“finished”是过去分词，应该用动词原形“finish”表示不定式。

× making least it's a really good habit.

✓ making lists is a really good habit.

“least”应为“lists”，复数形式，表示“清单”。

× And As for me, I really like making this to do anything, it can remind me some small task.

✓ And as for me, I really like making lists to do anything; they can remind me of some small tasks.

“making this to do anything”中“this”指代不明，应改为“making lists”；“it can remind me some small task”中“it”应改为复数“they”，且“remind me some small task”应为“remind me of some small tasks”，加介词“of”表示提醒内容。

× it can remind me some small task.

✓ it can remind me of some small tasks.

动词“remind”后面需要介词“of”来引出被提醒的内容。

× I prefer make the list on my phones because I think it's more convenient.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because I think it's more convenient.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”；“phones”应为单数“phone”，表示手机。

× I prefer make the list on my phones because I think it's more convenient.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because I think it's more convenient.

“phones”应为单数“phone”，表示单一设备。

× But it's depend on the situation.

✓ But it depends on the situation.

“depend”作为动词应加第三人称单数形式“depends”，且“depend on”是固定搭配，表示“取决于”。

× But it's depend on the situation.

✓ But it depends on the situation.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“depend”应加-s变为“depends”。