List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“can helps”应为“can help”，且表达略显重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意语法准确。

예시: Yes, I usually write a shopping list before I go out. It helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary things, which saves money.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“to my To Do List”应为“my To Do List”，“frustrating me for”表达不完整。建议注意句子结构和时态一致，表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I like to make plans at work because it helps me set clear goals and organize my day. However, sometimes my To Do List becomes too long, and I find it frustrating when I can't finish everything.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“schedule a time their time”不通顺，“schedule makes time constricted”表达不自然。建议使用更准确的表达，注意主谓一致。

예시: I'm not sure why some people dislike making lists, but I think it's because schedules can feel restrictive, and some people prefer to have more freedom with their time.

제안: 回答内容混乱，存在语法和逻辑错误，如“forget Sims”不明，“paper use phone”表达不清。建议理清思路，使用完整句子表达观点。

예시: I definitely prefer making lists on paper because I often forget my phone when I go out. Using paper ensures I always have my list with me, which is more reliable for me.

× This can helps me to memorize what I want and I won't buy unnecessary items which can save my money.

✓ This can help me to memorize what I want and I won't buy unnecessary items which can save my money.

动词help在第三人称单数形式中不需要加s，因为前面有情态动词can，情态动词后动词用原形。

× However, sometimes to my To Do List becomes too long and I found it hard to complete everything, which can quite frustrating me for.

✓ However, sometimes my To Do List becomes too long and I find it hard to complete everything, which can be quite frustrating for me.

句中多余的介词to应删除，时态应保持一致，found改为find，短语结构调整为be quite frustrating for me。

× I'm the kind of person who would like to make plans, so I'm not sure about why people don't like to schedule a time their time.

✓ I'm the kind of person who would like to make plans, so I'm not sure why people don't like to schedule their time.

句中多余的介词about应删除，schedule后不需要再加a time，their time前不应有a。

× I imagine that it's because schedule makes time constricted and these people likes freedom.

✓ I imagine that it's because schedules make time constricted and these people like freedom.

schedule应为复数schedules，主语复数时谓语动词make和like也应为复数形式。

× Definitely on paper, I usually forget Sims when I go out like keys, computers.

✓ Definitely on paper, I usually forget things when I go out like keys, computers.

Sims应为things，原词拼写错误，导致代词使用不当。

× Not to mention the paper use phone is more convenient and most importantly I won't forget to bring them out.

✓ Not to mention, using a phone is more convenient and most importantly, I won't forget to bring them out.

句子结构混乱，需调整为正确的动名词短语using a phone，并加逗号分隔，使句子通顺。