List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“I'm in to make a list”应为“I like to make a list”，“I shopping”应为“I shop”，“don't forgot”应为“don't forget”，“inclusive purchase”表达不准确，建议使用“unnecessary purchases”。此外，句子结构较为简单，连接词使用不足，建议使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I like to make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it allows me to stay within my budget and avoid unnecessary purchases. To be more efficient, I usually categorize the products and use shopping apps to track my expenses.

제안: 回答内容基本清晰，但存在语法错误，如“This help me”应为“This helps me”，“my task”应为“my tasks”。此外，回答较为简短，缺少连接词和具体细节，建议增加连接词并详细说明如何使用应用程序帮助管理任务。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. I use a DTG application to remind me of my tasks, which ensures I don't forget anything. As a result, I feel satisfied when I complete all my tasks on time.

제안: 回答内容较完整，表达了多种原因，但存在语法错误，如“it take”应为“it takes”，“what leads to be done”表达不准确，建议改为“what needs to be done”，“do thing”应为“do things”。建议使用更多连接词如“because”、“so”使句子更连贯。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. They believe they can remember what needs to be done without writing it down, so they prefer to start tasks directly. Moreover, some people like to be flexible and don't want to be bound by lists because they enjoy doing things according to their own ideas, which makes them feel free.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法和用词错误，如“myself more”应为“me more”，“if I am community”表达不清，应为“if I am outside”或“in the community”，“record at anything anytime”应为“record anything anytime”。建议使用连接词如“however”并改进句子结构使表达更自然。

예시: It depends on the situation. When I am at school, I tend to use paper and pen to make my list because it motivates me more. However, when I am outside, my phone is more convenient since I can record anything anytime.

× Yes, I'm in to make a list when I shopping because it ensures that I don't forgot anything important.

✓ Yes, I'm into making a list when I shop because it ensures that I don't forget anything important.

这里“I'm in to make”应为“I'm into making”，因为“be into”后面应接动名词形式。动词“shopping”应改为动词原形“shop”，因为这里是一般现在时的习惯动作。动词“forgot”应为原形“forget”，因为否定句中助动词“do”后动词用原形。

× Yes, I'm in to make a list when I shopping because it ensures that I don't forgot anything important.

✓ Yes, I'm into making a list when I shop because it ensures that I don't forget anything important.

动词“forgot”错误地使用了过去式，应使用动词原形“forget”，因为在否定句中助动词“do”后动词用原形。

× It helps me stay within budget and avoid inclusive purchase.

✓ It helps me stay within budget and avoid unnecessary purchases.

“inclusive purchase”用词不当，应改为“unnecessary purchases”表示避免不必要的购买。

× To improve efficiency, I usually category the products and use the shopping apps to track my consumption records.

✓ To improve efficiency, I usually categorize the products and use shopping apps to track my consumption records.

“category”应为动词形式“categorize”，表示分类。

× This help me stay organized and focused on what I need to do.

✓ This helps me stay organized and focused on what I need to do.

主语“This”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故“help”改为“helps”。

× I use a DTG application to remind me of my task and I feel good when I can complete them.

✓ I use a DTG application to remind me of my tasks and I feel good when I can complete them.

“task”应为复数“tasks”，因为后文用“them”指代多个任务。

× Some people don't like making this because they think it take too much time.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time.

“this”指代不明确，应改为“lists”。“it take”主谓不一致，应改为“it takes”。

× Some people don't like making this because they think it take too much time.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故“take”改为“takes”。

× They believe they can remember what leads to be done without writing it down, so they prefer to start doing the task directly.

✓ They believe they can remember what needs to be done without writing it down, so they prefer to start doing the task directly.

“what leads to be done”用词错误，应为“what needs to be done”，表示“需要完成的事情”。

× Some people like to do thing according to their own ideas, which makes them feel free.

✓ Some people like to do things according to their own ideas, which makes them feel free.

“thing”应为复数“things”，表示多项事情。

× It depends on situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

“situation”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特定情况。

× When I am in school, I tend to use paper and pen to record my list which can motivate myself more.

✓ When I am in school, I tend to use paper and pen to record my list which can motivate me more.

“motivate myself”用法错误，应为“motivate me”，因为这里是被动接受动作。

× However, if I am community, my phone will be more convenient because it can record at anything anytime.

✓ However, if I am in the community, my phone will be more convenient because it can record anything anytime.

“if I am community”缺少介词，应为“if I am in the community”。“record at anything anytime”中“at”多余，应去掉。