List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر رسمية وطبيعية، وابتعد عن استخدام العبارات العامية مثل "wanna". كما يجب أن تبدأ بجملة واضحة مباشرة تجيب على السؤال، ثم تضيف تفاصيل داعمة بشكل منظم.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need to buy. For example, last week I prepared a list before going to the supermarket, which saved me time and prevented me from forgetting anything.

제안: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا ومنطقية، واستخدم عبارات صحيحة نحويًا. ابدأ بجملة واضحة تجيب على السؤال، ثم اشرح كيف تساعدك القائمة في عملك مع أمثلة.

예시: Yes, I sometimes make lists for my work. They help me organize my tasks better and ensure I don't forget important duties, especially when I have a busy schedule.

제안: حاول تحسين القواعد النحوية واستخدام كلمات مناسبة. ابدأ بجملة واضحة تشرح السبب، ثم أضف تفاصيل داعمة باستخدام روابط منطقية.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and they are impatient. They prefer to do things quickly without planning, which can sometimes lead to forgetting important tasks.

제안: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر دقة وقواعد صحيحة. ابدأ بجملة واضحة تعبر عن تفضيلك، ثم اشرح السبب مع تفاصيل داعمة.

예시: I prefer to make my lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Using my phone helps me avoid losing the list, unlike paper lists which can be easily misplaced.

× It's helped me to remember what I wanna buy.

✓ It helps me to remember what I want to buy.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'It's helped' which is present perfect tense, but the context requires simple present tense 'It helps' to indicate a general truth. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech.

× I think it's work if someone commended.

✓ I think it works if someone recommends.

The phrase 'it's work' is incorrect; it should be 'it works' to indicate effectiveness. Also, 'commended' is the past tense of 'commend' meaning to praise, but the intended meaning is 'recommend', so 'recommends' is correct here.

× I think because it's take time and people are not patients, so I want everything so quickly.

✓ I think it's because it takes time and people are not patient, so they want everything quickly.

'It's take' is incorrect; it should be 'it takes' for subject-verb agreement. 'Patients' is a noun meaning people receiving medical care; the correct adjective is 'patient'. Also, 'I want' should be 'they want' to match the subject 'people'. 'So quickly' is better as 'quickly'.

× I really love put my list on my phone because my phone is with me all the time but the paper I think I will lost it.

✓ I really love putting my list on my phone because my phone is with me all the time, but I think I will lose the paper.

After 'love', the verb should be in the '-ing' form: 'putting'. 'I will lost' is incorrect; 'lost' is past tense, the correct future tense is 'will lose'. Also, 'the paper' is better than just 'paper' here.