List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和语义不清的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I trust my memory to remember what I need. I find it easier to just pick things as I go.

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，表达略显重复。建议注意时态一致性，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I always make a list before work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly. This way, I can manage my time efficiently throughout the day.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱且有重复。建议使用更简洁的句子，明确表达观点，并避免重复。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. For example, I don't make a list before shopping because I enjoy choosing things randomly.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，使用连词连接观点，使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy writing by hand. Also, it's easier on my eyes since I check the list several times a day.

× Uh, that's a tricky questions.

✓ Uh, that's a tricky question.

questions 是复数形式，但这里指的是单数的“一个问题”，应使用单数形式 question。

× I never make a list before shopping 'cause I believe in my mind that I have a good memory.

✓ I never made a list before shopping 'cause I believe in my mind that I have a good memory.

描述过去的习惯动作时，应该使用一般过去时 made 而不是现在时 make。

× So that's it isn't a necessary thing for me.

✓ So that's not a necessary thing for me.

这里的句子结构不正确，使用了多余的 it，且否定形式应为 that's not。

× I have experiences of making this for my work.

✓ I have experience of making this for my work.

experience 在这里作为不可数名词使用，不能用复数形式 experiences。

× Actually I always make the list before working.

✓ Actually I always make the list before working.

这里描述的是习惯动作，使用一般现在时 make 是正确的，无需修改。

× I think it's very useful because it provided me a very clear logic of all the tasks I have to do for a day.

✓ I think it's very useful because it provides me a very clear logic of all the tasks I have to do for a day.

描述现在的事实或习惯时，动词应使用一般现在时 provides，而不是过去时 provided。

× So I always do make.

✓ So I always do.

这里的 do make 结构不完整，应该只用 do 表示强调，或者改为 I always make a list。

× Hmm, I do believe there's some people some people don't like making this like me.

✓ Hmm, I do believe there are some people who don't like making this like me.

some people 是复数，前面应使用 there are 而不是 there's；且需要加 who 引导定语从句。

× Like before shopping. I don't make a list before that because I like randomly doing things be.

✓ Like before shopping, I don't make a list because I like randomly doing things.

句子中多余的 before that 和结尾的 be 应该去掉，且两个句子应合并为一句。

× I prefer make a list on on the paper because I like the sense of writing and also it is good for eyes because you need to check on the list several times per day and and writing the paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I like the sense of writing and also it is good for the eyes because you need to check the list several times per day and writing on paper.

prefer 后应接不定式 to make；on paper 不需要加 the；good for eyes 应为 good for the eyes；check on the list 应为 check the list；writing the paper 应为 writing on paper。

× Everything on the paper is like satisfied in my eyes.

✓ Everything on the paper is satisfying to my eyes.

satisfied 是形容人的情绪，描述事物时应使用现在分词 satisfying；in my eyes 应改为 to my eyes。