List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
I don't really think I'm willing to do that when I go shopping because I have a good memory. So I would definitely take advantage of my memory. So I just, OK, read out loud and then I remember and then just go for it. That's make it just make it easy.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yeah, sure. I have a lot of tasks that I need to meet the deadline at work. So if I don't take notes or make a list of to make to advertise the task, I think I may forget all the things that I need to do. So taking notes and making a list help me.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I'm not sure why people don't like to do that, but for me, I personally like to make a list, especially for my work because it is helps me a lot. But they don't like to do that, maybe because they don't like to take a lot of time to do that because they have good memory.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I have a flexible person and like convenience so I do like both of them. I usually make a note on my phones because I I'm afraid that I will would forget the things that I need to remember right at that time. So I just don't know my phone and OK, OK, write down, write down.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và tránh lặp lại ý. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I have a good memory. I just read the items aloud to help me remember them, which makes shopping easier for me.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn.
예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I have many tasks with deadlines. If I don't write them down, I might forget some important things. Therefore, making a list helps me stay organized and meet my deadlines.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết ý và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.
예시: I'm not sure why some people dislike making lists, but I think it might be because they don't want to spend extra time writing them. Also, some people may rely on their good memory instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 55.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại hoặc giấy để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
예시: I am flexible and like convenience, so I use both paper and my phone. However, I usually prefer making lists on my phone because I am afraid of forgetting important things, so I write them down immediately.
문법
× That's make it just make it easy.
✓ That just makes it easy.
The original sentence uses 'make' incorrectly after 'That's'. The correct form is 'makes' because the subject 'That' is singular and requires the third person singular verb form. Also, 'just make it easy' is redundant; 'just makes it easy' is clearer.
× So if I don't take notes or make a list of to make to advertise the task, I think I may forget all the things that I need to do.
✓ So if I don't take notes or make a list to organize the tasks, I think I may forget all the things that I need to do.
The phrase 'make a list of to make to advertise the task' is incorrect and confusing. The intended meaning is likely 'make a list to organize the tasks'. The verb 'advertise' is inappropriate here. The correction clarifies the purpose of the list.
× So taking notes and making a list help me.
✓ So taking notes and making a list helps me.
The subject 'taking notes and making a list' is considered singular as a combined activity, so the verb should be 'helps' (third person singular) to agree with the subject.
× because it is helps me a lot.
✓ because it helps me a lot.
The phrase 'it is helps' is incorrect because two verbs are used together without proper structure. The correct form is 'it helps' to express the present simple tense.
× I have a flexible person and like convenience so I do like both of them.
✓ I am a flexible person and like convenience, so I do like both of them.
The phrase 'I have a flexible person' is incorrect because 'have' is not used to describe personal traits. The correct verb is 'am' to indicate identity or characteristics.
× because I I'm afraid that I will would forget the things that I need to remember right at that time.
✓ because I'm afraid that I will forget the things that I need to remember right at that time.
The phrase 'will would' is incorrect because two modal verbs cannot be used together. The correct modal verb here is 'will' to indicate future certainty.
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