List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I forgot to buy tomatoes, which I needed for a recipe, so making a list prevents that from happening.

제안: Your answer should be more structured with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repetition and use linking words to explain how making lists improves your work.

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized. For instance, by listing my tasks, I can prioritize them effectively, which improves my productivity.

제안: Avoid saying 'I don't know' and try to give a clear opinion with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

예시: Some people might not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or feel it adds extra pressure. Additionally, they may prefer to remember things spontaneously rather than following a plan.

제안: Reduce filler words and repetition to make your answer clearer and more fluent. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. Since I always have my phone with me, I can quickly add items whenever I think of them.

× Yes, uh, I needed to make a list when I go to the shop because, uh, uh, sometimes I, I forgot, I forgot something because, uh, for example, I, I, for example, my, uh, my tomato is done.

✓ Yes, uh, I need to make a list when I go to the shop because, uh, sometimes I forget something. For example, my tomato is done.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'needed' (past tense) and 'forgot' (past tense) when the context is about a habitual action in the present. The verbs should be in the present tense 'need' and 'forget' to match the ongoing habit. Also, the sentence was repetitive and fragmented, so it was streamlined for clarity.

× Yes I do. I make a list for my work because it improve it can improve my my work. So I need to make a list.

✓ Yes, I do. I make a list for my work because it improves my work. So I need to make a list.

The verb 'improve' should be in the third person singular form 'improves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the phrase 'it can improve my my work' was redundant and awkward, so it was corrected to a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× Sorry, I I don't know, maybe some people don't like making less because they think they feel making less is trouble. So maybe.

✓ Sorry, I don't know. Maybe some people don't like making lists because they feel making lists is troublesome. So maybe.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'lists'. Also, 'is trouble' is better expressed as 'is troublesome' to correctly describe the feeling. The sentence was also split for clarity.

× Uh, I prefer to make a list on my phone because, uh, it's very convenient. Umm, my phone, uh, always in my hand. So I, I only need uh, uh, something I, uh, write, uh, I write, uh, uh.

✓ Uh, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient. Umm, my phone is always in my hand. So I only need to write something.

The phrase 'in my hand' is acceptable but 'in my hand' is less common than 'in my hands' or 'with me'. However, 'in my hand' can be used if holding one phone. The original sentence was fragmented and incomplete; it was corrected to a complete and grammatically correct sentence. Also, 'I only need uh, uh, something I, uh, write' was corrected to 'I only need to write something' to properly use the infinitive verb form after 'need'.