List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea multiple times. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a list is helpful, and conclude with a specific example.

예시: I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For instance, last week I bought all the groceries on my list without forgetting anything, which saved me time and effort.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain why making lists helps you. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'each and everything' and be more specific about how lists improve your work.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete all my tasks on time. This way, I can manage my responsibilities better and improve my productivity.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to contrast ideas effectively.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time and limits their flexibility. However, I think lists are useful as they help manage tasks and meet deadlines efficiently.

제안: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by avoiding repetitive phrases like 'each and every moment' and by using linking words such as 'because' and 'so' to explain your preference clearly.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily check my tasks or shopping items anytime, unlike paper lists which can be misplaced.

× No, I don't make lists but I prefer to make list while shopping or while going to shopping just because making list is very helpful.

✓ No, I don't make lists but I prefer to make a list while shopping or while going shopping just because making a list is very helpful.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'going to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'going shopping'. This correction ensures proper singular usage and correct verb-preposition combination.

× We get each and everything which we have listed in the list and if we don't make we forget one or another thing.

✓ We get each and everything which we have listed in the list, and if we don't make one, we forget one or another thing.

The phrase 'if we don't make' is incomplete; it should be 'if we don't make one' to refer to a list. This clarifies the singular object being discussed.

× Yes, I do make a list for my work just to organize and ensure that I finish all my work in a day which I have scheduled each and everything.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work just to organize and ensure that I finish all my work in a day, for which I have scheduled each and everything.

Added 'for' before 'which' to correctly link the clause. Also, 'each and everything' is acceptable but could be improved for clarity.

× Making list for work is easier to improve our skills and to manage each and everything and it is very useful.

✓ Making a list for work is easier to improve our skills and to manage each and everything, and it is very useful.

The phrase 'Making list' requires the article 'a' before 'list' because 'list' is a singular countable noun.

× Some people don't like making lists just because they think it is a waste of time.

✓ Some people don't like making lists just because they think it is a waste of time.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× And if we make list we cannot complete our work on the given given time and a deadline provided by provided or to ensure by ourselves.

✓ And if we make a list, we cannot complete our work in the given time and meet the deadline provided or ensured by ourselves.

'Make list' should be 'make a list' as 'list' is singular countable noun. Also, 'on the given given time' is incorrect; it should be 'in the given time'. The phrase 'provided by provided or to ensure by ourselves' is unclear and corrected to 'provided or ensured by ourselves' for clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The phrase 'on phone' is incomplete; it should be 'on my phone' to specify possession.

× There is a basic reason just because we carry our phone every day and each and every moment we have our phone.

✓ There is a basic reason: we carry our phone every day, and at every moment, we have our phone with us.

Added a colon after 'reason' for clarity. Also, 'each and every moment we have our phone' is awkward; corrected to 'at every moment, we have our phone with us' for natural expression.

× If we make lists on our phone, we can see what we have to do and what we have to buy.

✓ If we make lists on our phone, we can see what we have to do and what we have to buy.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× But making a list on paper is not useful.

✓ But making a list on paper is not useful.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.