List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达了观点，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误，如“without attracted”应为“without being attracted”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确。

예시: I always make a shopping list because it helps me focus on what I need and avoid being distracted by unnecessary items.

제안: 回答表达了原因和结果，但句子结构较复杂且有语法错误，如“all my works”应为“all my work”。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I always make a work list because it helps me manage my tasks and reduce anxiety. By following the list strictly, I can complete all my work efficiently.

제안: 回答缺少主题句，句子结构不够清晰，且表达不够自然。建议先直接回答问题，然后用连接词补充原因，句子更连贯。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they feel they must follow them strictly. As a result, they worry about not finishing tasks if they do things not on the list.

제안: 回答表达了偏好和原因，但句子较长且有语法错误，如“scan in other apps”表达不清。建议分句表达，使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me remember better. If I use my phone, I tend to get distracted by other apps and forget the list.

× I always make a list when I shop because I can just aim at what I'm looking for following my list without attracted by other useless things.

✓ I always make a list when I shop because I can just aim at what I'm looking for following my list without being attracted by other useless things.

这里的“attracted”需要用动名词形式“being attracted”，因为它是介词“without”的宾语，介词后面应接动名词。

× so I will strictly follow my list to ensure that all my works can be done well.

✓ so I will strictly follow my list to ensure that all my work can be done well.

“work”作为不可数名词，表示工作内容时不加复数形式，使用“works”是不正确的。

× Because people think that they have to strictly follow the list, they can't finish the work if they do other things out of the list.

✓ Because people think that they have to strictly follow the list, they can't finish the work if they do other things outside the list.

短语“out of the list”用法不当，正确表达应为“outside the list”，表示“在列表之外”。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it can help me remember the list better and if I use my phone to make the list, I will scan in other apps so that I will forget the list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it can help me remember the list better and if I use my phone to make the list, I will get distracted by other apps so that I will forget the list.

“scan in other apps”表达不准确，应改为“get distracted by other apps”，表示“被其他应用分散注意力”。