List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer does not address the question directly and is unclear. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid confusion and irrelevant responses.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

제안: Your answer is somewhat relevant but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Try to form clear sentences with proper structure and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy and be concise.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because sometimes I forget tasks. It helps me stay organized and avoid missing important duties.

제안: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to give a clear reason with supporting details and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid unnecessary repetition and focus on clarity.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember tasks mentally instead of writing them down.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but can be improved by using better linking words and avoiding repetition. Try to use a wider range of vocabulary and more natural expressions.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and always with me. However, when I don't have my phone, I write lists on paper instead.

× Yes, I always make go make a list for my work, because some work I forget some work I do.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work, because sometimes I forget some work and do some work.

The phrase 'make go make' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'make a list'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear; it should be simplified to express that sometimes the student forgets some work and does some work. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So it's very challenging, challenging situation.

✓ So it's a very challenging situation.

The phrase 'challenging, challenging situation' is repetitive and lacks an article. Adding the article 'a' before 'very challenging situation' and removing the repeated word improves sentence structure and clarity.

× And after that when I unable to do my work, my mother scold me you should to do this work.

✓ And after that, when I am unable to do my work, my mother scolds me saying I should do this work.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the correct present tense 'I am unable'. 'Scold' should be in third person singular 'scolds' to agree with 'my mother'. Also, 'you should to do' is incorrect; it should be 'I should do'. The correction fixes verb forms and sentence clarity.

× Why should you don't do?

✓ Why don't you do it?

The phrase 'should you don't do' is grammatically incorrect. The correct question form is 'Why don't you do it?'. This correction fixes the pronoun and auxiliary verb usage to form a proper negative question.

× Because the people are smart and intelligent.

✓ Because some people are smart and intelligent.

Using 'the people' implies a specific group, but here it refers to people in general. 'Some people' is more appropriate to indicate certain individuals. This correction improves pronoun usage for generalization.

× They remember all things that after that I will do this work I should do, I, I want to do, I, I, I could do so they remember.

✓ They remember everything they need to do, so they don't need to make lists.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Simplifying it to express that smart people remember their tasks and therefore don't need lists improves sentence structure and clarity.

× When I don't have phone I make list in paper all them.

✓ When I don't have a phone, I make lists on paper.

The phrase 'make list in paper all them' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' for paper, and 'a phone' requires an article. Also, 'lists' should be plural to match the context. This correction fixes preposition and article usage.

× But right now I have phone so I make a list in my phone because it is easy and it it always in my hand and I can see whenever I want to see.

✓ But right now I have a phone, so I make a list on my phone because it is easy, it is always in my hand, and I can see it whenever I want.

The sentence misses the article 'a' before 'phone'. The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using a phone as a device. The phrase 'it it' is a repetition error. Also, 'I can see whenever I want to see' is redundant; 'I can see it whenever I want' is clearer. This correction addresses article, preposition, repetition, and pronoun usage.

× So it is very easy for making list in my phone.

✓ So it is very easy to make a list on my phone.

The phrase 'easy for making list' is incorrect; the correct form is 'easy to make a list'. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. This correction fixes preposition and verb form usage.