List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and redundancy in your answers. Use clear and concise sentences, and organise your ideas logically. For example, start with a direct answer, then explain the benefits of making a list with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I always make a list before going shopping because it helps me save time and remember everything I need.

제안: Focus on using correct verb tenses and avoid filler words like 'like' and repeated words. Also, use linking words such as 'firstly', 'secondly', and 'finally' properly to organise your answer clearly.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because I prefer to complete tasks in order. In my diary, I write what I will do firstly, secondly, and finally, which helps me stay organised.

제안: Avoid making negative or judgmental statements like calling people 'lazy'. Instead, give neutral reasons and explain clearly. Also, improve sentence structure and coherence by using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Some people may not like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and find lists restrictive, so they choose other ways to organise their tasks.

제안: Try to avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use clear and simple sentences to express your preference and reasons. For example, explain why you prefer paper over phone with linking words like 'because'.

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember things better than using my phone.

× I I write.

✓ I write.

The repetition of 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed to maintain correct sentence structure.

× I wrote about the things that I would do firstly, secondly and thirdly.

✓ I write about the things that I would do firstly, secondly and thirdly.

The question is about habitual action, so present tense 'write' is appropriate instead of past tense 'wrote'.

× Some people doesn't like to work in order as they are super lazy and they are not that much productive making.

✓ Some people don't like to work in order as they are super lazy and they are not that much productive.

'Some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'productive making' is incorrect and should be omitted for clarity.

× Maybe they don't want to be in, they don't want to be punctual doing that work.

✓ Maybe they don't want to be punctual in doing that work.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the ideas into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.