List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够自然。建议你直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子说明原因，避免重复表达“in my brain”。可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: No, I don't usually make a shopping list. Instead, I try to remember what I need, but sometimes I forget things because I don't write them down.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子说明效果。注意时态和句子结构，避免重复。

예시: No, I don't usually make lists for work because I'm not very organized. As a result, I often forget some tasks, which affects my efficiency.

제안: 回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并用连接词连接原因。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time and makes things more complicated than necessary.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法和用词错误。建议简化句子，注意词汇拼写和语法，使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient. I can check my tasks anytime without carrying paper.

× I will make the list before I starting or go to shopping so it can make it work.

✓ I will make the list before I start or go shopping so it can work.

The verb 'starting' is incorrectly used after 'before I'. After 'before', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'.

× I always forgot somethings.

✓ I always forget some things.

The word 'somethings' is incorrect; 'something' is an uncountable pronoun and does not have a plural form. Also, 'forgot' is past tense, but the sentence context requires present tense 'forget'.

× I always forgot somethings.

✓ I always forget some things.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' should be used.

× I usually make the imagination list on my brain, in my brain.

✓ I usually make the list in my mind.

The phrase 'on my brain' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in my mind' to express thinking or remembering.

× I bought the things that I remember just.

✓ I buy the things that I just remember.

The verb tense should be present to match the habitual action, and 'just' should be placed before 'remember' for correct adverb placement.

× I said before I'm not a very organized person so I will make the list before I starting or go to shopping so it can make it work.

✓ As I said before, I'm not a very organized person, so I will make the list before I start or go shopping so it can work.

Added 'As' for correct phrase, corrected verb forms, and improved sentence structure for clarity.

× I usually do the things that I remember like studying in the school.

✓ I usually do the things that I remember, like studying at school.

Added comma for clarity and corrected preposition 'in the school' to 'at school' which is the correct usage.

× I always do the things that I just remember so I always forgot somethings.

✓ I always do the things that I just remember, so I always forget some things.

Corrected verb tense from 'forgot' to 'forget' and 'somethings' to 'some things'. Added comma for sentence clarity.

× I think the major majority of reasons that might be very spare time is a waste time things that I think because and also is very complex.

✓ I think the main reasons are that it wastes a lot of time and is very complex.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. Reconstructed for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× So I I hate to do the things very complex, though I think it's the only.

✓ So I hate doing things that are very complex, though I think that's the only reason.

Removed duplicate 'I', corrected verb form to gerund 'doing', and clarified sentence meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on my mobile is because Ferry is a way that makes my future life more simply because I can usually check the things I need to do on my phone and I don't need to carry the paper all the time.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile because it is a way that makes my future life simpler; I can usually check the things I need to do on my phone and don't need to carry paper all the time.

Corrected preposition usage, removed unclear word 'Ferry', improved sentence flow and grammar.