List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「I make shops」は不適切で、「I make a list」が正しいです。また、内容がやや冗長で、より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list to remember important items. For instance, I check if I need to buy rice before going to the store. This helps me avoid forgetting anything.

제안: 回答が矛盾しており、「This list is useless because it helps me notice important things」という表現は意味が通じません。文法的にも不自然です。リストの効果について明確に述べ、具体的な理由を添えると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I make a list every morning to organize my tasks because I have many things to do in the evening. The list helps me remember important duties and manage my time effectively.

제안: 回答は概ね理解できますが、「MMM」などの曖昧な表現は避け、より自然な言い回しを使いましょう。また、「important meeting」ではなく「important meetings」など複数形を使うと良いです。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they can remember important tasks, like meetings, without writing them down. Therefore, they find making lists unnecessary and troublesome.

제안: 回答は意図が伝わりますが、文法的に不自然で冗長な部分があります。「every time everywhere」などの表現は繰り返しすぎているため、簡潔にしましょう。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry my smartphone, so I can check my list anytime and anywhere, which is very convenient for me.

× I make shops every time I go shopping because I have to remember important things such as what you buy.

✓ I make a list every time I go shopping because I have to remember important things such as what to buy.

The word 'shops' is incorrect here because the student means to say they make a 'list', which is singular. Also, 'what you buy' should be 'what to buy' to correctly express the intended meaning. This is a singular and plural issue and also sentence structure improvement.

× This list help me remember it.

✓ This list helps me remember it.

The subject 'list' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' (third person singular) instead of 'help'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× This list is useless because it helps me notice important things such as important.

✓ This list is useful because it helps me notice important things.

The sentence contradicts itself by saying 'useless' but then stating it helps notice important things. Also, 'such as important' is incomplete and incorrect. The correction changes 'useless' to 'useful' and removes the incomplete phrase. This is a singular/plural and sentence structure issue.

× MMM, because they don't have to make a list.

✓ MMM, because they don't need to make a list.

The phrase 'don't have to' is grammatically correct but 'don't need to' is more natural in this context to express lack of necessity. This is a modal verb usage issue.

× Some people can remember important tasks such as important meeting without making a list, so they find it troublesome to do so.

✓ Some people can remember important tasks such as important meetings without making a list, so they find it troublesome to do so.

The phrase 'important meeting' should be plural 'important meetings' to match 'tasks' and to be grammatically correct. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I prefer making a list on my phone because I can check it every time everywhere I bring my smartphone with me so.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I can check it anytime and anywhere since I always bring my smartphone with me.

The original sentence has awkward word order and redundancy ('every time everywhere' and 'with me so'). The correction improves clarity and naturalness by restructuring the sentence. This is a sentence structure error.

× That I I can check my list every time everywhere is useful for me.

✓ Being able to check my list anytime and anywhere is useful for me.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The correction rephrases it to a clear and grammatically correct sentence. This is a sentence structure error.