List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but avoid repeating words like "because because" and try to use linking words such as "so" or "therefore" to improve coherence. Also, try to vary your vocabulary a bit more to sound natural.

예시: It depends on how many items I'm buying. If it's just a few, like two or three, I don't make a list because I can easily remember them. However, if I'm buying many items, say 20 or more, I make a list so that I don't forget anything important.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by correcting small errors (e.g., "A to do list" should be "a to-do list") and by adding linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid repeating phrases like "life" twice in one sentence.

예시: Although I'm currently unemployed, I still make a to-do list because it helps me keep track of my tasks and stay organized.

제안: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words like "either" and "or" to connect reasons, and avoid repeating the same idea with different words.

예시: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists either because it takes too much time or because they have a good memory and can remember things without writing them down.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains a grammatical error: "very easier" should be "much easier". Also, try to add more detail or reasons to enrich your answer and use linking words for coherence.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's quicker and much easier to access them anytime, plus I can edit the list easily if needed.

× At the moment I'm unemployed, but I still make A to do list so that I can keep track of my life and live a very organized life.

✓ At the moment I'm unemployed, but I still make a to-do list so that I can keep track of my life and live a very organized life.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it is not at the beginning of the sentence. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' because it is a compound noun. Articles should be used correctly with common nouns, and compound nouns should be written properly to convey the correct meaning.

× I prefer to make it on my phone because it's less time consuming and it's very easier to look at.

✓ I prefer to make it on my phone because it's less time-consuming and it's much easier to look at.

The phrase 'less time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'less time-consuming' when used as an adjective. Also, 'very easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is a comparative adjective and should be modified by 'much' or 'far' instead of 'very'. Therefore, 'much easier' is the correct form.